Is this peom good i just wrote it?

silly me i thought we could be thought you were my prince guess i was tricked you'll never know the feeling i had for you just went and made me sad all those tears i cried, were just for a world of hurt and lies the way you held me i felt so safe another guy will never fill that space you still give me... show more silly me i thought we could be
thought you were my prince guess i was tricked
you'll never know the feeling i had
for you just went and made me sad
all those tears i cried, were just for a world of hurt and lies
the way you held me i felt so safe
another guy will never fill that space
you still give me the butterflies that were once so strong
going on without you seems so wrong
you made me so happy but now i feel crappy and
i never stop loving until the end
just hope one day you'll be mine again
i can't explain my feelings for you
but i can say i dream about you
then i wake up and see it's not real
you don't know how that makes me feel
you knew i'd never leave so you insisted to tease
you made me think you felt the same i don't doubt you did but what happened to change
i miss you now more than ever
some might say im stuck on you but
they don't know that i truly love you.
you can move on but for me its to hard ill always be here no matter what happens, and now that the time has came and past
my feelings for you will forever last..
Update: no need for bashing hahaha wow its not a poem poem i don't care if the vocabulary is good or not i jst wrote it off the top of my head
Update 2: but please be honest if you don't like it you can just say no
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