flower asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

我寫這樣對不對,麻煩幫我看一下,謝謝達人~

請達人們幫我找出錯的地方,給予訂正,感激不盡

The study of single-parent family of elementary school student using the community resources

Abstract

The purpose of this study is to explore the condition of single-parent family of elementary school student using community resources. Researcher try to understand the present status of single-parent family of elementary school student, what community resources they often use, the difficulties they face when using community resources, and know the expectation of future life and community resources. This is a qualitative research, and researcher use a semi-construct questionnaire to interview the single parents with children studying in elementary school. Researcher finds the conclusions as follow:

1.Single parents have a big economical burden, they can’t do well with job and family at the same time, even their health.

2.Single parent shows weakness on cultivating children, especially male single parent has more trouble on the point.

3.Some divorced couples bring problems to single parent on teaching children.

4.Single parent family doesn’t fully use the formal community resources.

5.The informal community resources single parents often use are from relatives, friends, and informal organizations.

6.The difficulties that single-parent family faces when using community resources.

(1)Single parent can’t get welfare information easily; they always need other’s reminder.

(2)The informal supporting system as the main support for single-parent family is short for some families.

(3)The subsidy for single-parent family every government gives is different.

(4)The welfare organizations can’t fully evaluate multi-weakness for single-parent family.

(5)The personnel of welfare verifying can’t take care of the feeling of single parents when they seek for help.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The study of how single-parent family of pupil uses community resources

    Abstract

    The purpose of this study is to explore the condition of single-parent family of elementary school student using community resources, the researcher tries to understand the present status of the single-parent family of elementary school student, such as what community resources do they often use? what difficulties will they face when using community resources? and know the expectation of future life and community resources, this is a qualitative research, and researcher goes with a semi-construct questionnaire to interview the single parents with children studying in elementary schools, the researcher finds the conclusions as follow:

    1.Single parents have a heavy economical burden, they can’t manage job and family well at the same time, even their own health.

    2.Single parents shows weakness on cultivating their children, especially male single parent has more trouble on this task.

    3.Some divorced couples bring problems to each other on teaching their children.

    4.Single parent family doesn’t fully use the formal community resources.

    5.The informal community resources that single parents often use are from relatives, friends and informal organizations.

    6.The difficulties that single-parent family faces when using community resources:

    (1)Single parent can’t get welfare information easily; they always need other’s assistances.

    (2)The informal supporting system as the main support for single-parent family is short to some families.

    (3)The subsidy for single-parent family, which every government gives is different.

    (4)The welfare organizations can’t fully evaluate the multi-weakness of single-parent family.

    (5)The personnel of welfare are verified that they can’t consider the feeling of single parents when they seek for help.

  • 1 decade ago

    你寫得很好,我覺得。 只有一個地方跟你探討一下。

    Researcher try to understand the present status............. , and know the expectation of future life and community resources. 這個, and改成 , to know ..... 語意是否會更清楚? 意思當然就是Researcher want to know the expectation of future life an dcommunity resources. 你中間寫很多,就是為了這個結尾。 若是照著原來寫,末端只是原意的一部分,太弱了一點。

    供參考。其他就是照口語化寫。沒有什麼問題。

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