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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文文法高手請幫忙修文法

我朋友給我看這句子可是這句子感覺文法有錯但不知錯在哪 謝謝

I'm not sure when I will arrive there.

Because the airplane ticket is hard to book at this moment.

Therefore, if my airplane seat is confirmed that I will tell you the specific date and time.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I'm not sure when I will arrive there.

    Because the airplane ticket is hard to book at this moment.

    Therefore, if my airplane seat is confirmed that I will tell you the specific date and time.

    when,我會建議改成 what time。因為「when」是問說什麼時候(時間比較大範圍的,ex. last year, Sunday, this morning, etc.),那看這一句「我不確定我何時會到達那兒。」用what time應該會比較好。

    because通常會有兩句(因果)來組成,(ex. He is ill because of the cold weather.), 所以建議改成:It is because the airplane ticket is hard to book at this moment.

    that 建議不用加。此外,then不能當連接詞用,一定要加and,就是and then。不然的話,then那一句就要獨立出來,寫成Therefore,.... Then I will ....

    以下是建議給大大您參考的:

    I am not sure what time I will arrive (there).-there 可加可不加

    It is because the airplane ticket is hard to book at this moment.

    Therefore, if my airplane seat is confirmed, I will tell you the specific date and time.

    2009-06-25 21:52:40 補充:

    再補充一下下

    ● It is because +子句.

    所以可以不用兩個句子組成

  • 1 decade ago

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    I'm not sure when I will arrive there.

    Because the airplane ticket is hard to book at this moment.

    Therefore, if my airplane seat is confirmed that I will tell you the specific date and time.

    if my airplane seat is confirmed that I will tell you the specific date and time.

    我會用then來代替原句的that.

    原文有些直譯的感覺,以下稍作修正,供您參考!

    I’m not sure when I will be able to arrive there.

    Because the airplane ticket is hard to book at this time of the year.

    Therefore, I will confirmed with you the specific date and arrival time after I make sure the ticket booking situation.

    說法有很多種,以上供您參考!

    Source(s): me & myself
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