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Erin asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

誰可以幫翻英文~!急急急^^

希望各位大大ˇ能幫我翻譯英文故事;

Bill lamm loved to scuba dive.He loved to be in the deep water.He loved to look at the beautiful plants and fish.He loved the peace and quiet.

One Saturday afternoon Bill was scuba diving near the Florida coast.He was looking at some beautiful fish.Suddenly,the water pulled him down.Bill tried to swim up.The water pulled him down again.

Bill looked down and saw a huge pipe,it was about 16 feet across.The pipe was on the ocean floor.The water was puling Bill into the pipe!Again ,Bill tried to swim up.Again,the water pulled him down.

A few seconds later,Bill was inside the pipe The water was still pulling him.Wher was he going?What was at the end of the pipe?

Then Bill remembered:There was a nuclear power plant nearby.The pipe went to the nuclear power plant!What was at the end of the pipe?Probably a pump.

For four long minutes,Bill was in the pipe.He could see nothing.Everything was black.Then Bill saw something blue.What was it?What was at the end of the pipe?It was blue sky!Bill was out of the pipe!He was in a pool Of water at the nuclear power plant.Luckily,there was no pump at the end of the pipe.There was only a pool of water.Aworker at the nuclear power pland pulled Bill out the water.Bill had a few cuts on his legs and arms,but he was not really hurt.

Bill has a new hobby now.He doessn't scuba dive.He collects stamps

謝謝各位大大幫忙

Update:

希望各位大大不要誤會我ˇ我只是在做jack老師給我們的功課喔˙~

而且我就讀科林第8級>

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  • 小麥
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    你好,因為我發現這篇文章有些字拼錯了,所以我在翻譯的同時也將錯別字做了修改,翻得不是很好,但希望幫得到你。^_^

    Bill Lamm loved to scuba dive. He loved to be in the deep water.

    比爾蘭姆熱愛潛水運動,很喜歡在深海裡。

    He loved to look at the beautiful plants and fish. He loved the peace and quiet.

    他喜歡欣賞美麗的植物和魚,也喜歡寧靜。

    One Saturday afternoon, Bill was scuba diving near the Florida coast.

    某一個星期六下午,比爾正在佛羅里達海岸的附近潛水。

    He was looking at some beautiful fish. Suddenly, the water pulled him down. Bill tried to swim up. The water pulled him down again.

    當他正在欣賞著美麗的魚兒時,突然,水流將他往下拉,比爾試著往上游,水流卻又再次將他往下拉。

    Bill looked down and saw a huge pipe,it was about 16 feet across.The pipe was on the ocean floor.The water was pulling Bill into the pipe!

    比爾往下看,他看到一支約有16呎(=487.68公分)長的巨大管子 。管子在海底,海水正在將他吸進管子裡。

    Again, Bill tried to swim up. Again,the water pulled him down.

    A few seconds later,Bill was inside the pipe.

    比爾又試著往上游, 然而海水又再次的將他往下拉,幾秒過後,比爾已經在管子裡了。

    The water was still pulling him. Where is he going?What was at the end of the pipe?

    海水仍在拉著他。他會去哪裡呢?在管子的另一端是什麼東西呢?

    Then Bill remembered: There was a nuclear power plant nearby. The pipe went to the nuclear power plant! What was at the end of the pipe? Probably a pump.

    後來比爾突然想到:附近有一座核電廠,管子是通到核電廠的!管子的另一端是什麼東西呢?大概是水泵 (或唧筒)吧!--->這我不確定是哪一個,因為 pump 有這兩種意思,你選一個吧。

    For four long minutes, Bill was in the pipe. He could see nothing.Everything was black.

    在漫長的四分鐘裡,比爾都在管子裡,他什麼都看不到,一片黑暗。

    Then Bill saw something blue.What was it? What was at the end of the pipe? It was blue sky! Bill was out of the pipe!

    後來比爾看到藍色的東西,那是什麼呢?在管子的另一端是什麼東西呢?是藍天!比爾從管子裡出來了!

    He was in a pool of water at the nuclear power plant. Luckily, there was no pump at the end of the pipe.

    他正在核電廠的一個水池裡。幸好在管子的這一端不是水泵 (或唧筒)。

    There was only a pool of water. A worker at the nuclear power plant pulled Bill out the water.

    在那裡只有一個水池,一位核電廠的工作人員將他從水池裡拉起。

    Bill had a few cuts on his legs and arms, but he was not really hurt.

    Bill has a new hobby now. He doessn't scuba dive. He collects stamps

    比爾的雙手和雙腳有些地方被割傷了,但他並不覺得很疼。

    比爾現在有個新的嗜好,他已不再去潛水了,而是收集郵票。

    2009-06-18 22:08:52 補充:

    kinglai大大,請問你是在說我嗎?請你不要誤會,我幫人回答的翻譯都是自己翻的,我也跟你一樣不喜歡用翻譯軟體跟抄襲別人,當我剛要翻譯這篇文章時還沒人回答,翻譯完發表後才發現你比我先發表了,而不是如你所想的那樣,我也跟你遇到過相同的情形,我覺得你翻譯的也不錯,但這是靠投票者跟發問者自己決定的,不管你相不相信,我只想澄清一下,我並不覺得我的翻譯看起來像抄襲你的,同一篇文章翻譯出來本來就會有幾句類似,但個人用語的style不一樣,應該可以看得出來吧?!通常我投票時看到別人類似抄襲已先發表者,我就會投票給原創者,所以我絕對不是那種人,請不要誤會我。

    Source(s): Myself
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  • 6 years ago

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    比爾拉姆愛潛水dive.He愛將在深water.He喜歡看美麗的植物和fish.He熱愛和平與平靜。

    一個星期六下午條例草案潛水附近的佛羅里達州coast.He在尋找一些美麗的fish.Suddenly ,水把他down.Bill游泳up.The試圖把他的水了。

    條例草案看不起,看見一個巨大的管道,這是約16英尺across.The管道海洋floor.The水puling把條例草案管!此外,條例草案試圖游泳up.Again ,水把他下來。

    幾秒鐘後,條例草案在管內的水仍然是拉動him.Wher是他會什麼是結束時的管道?

    然後比爾記住:有一個核電廠nearby.The管到核電廠!什麼是結束時的管?可能是一個泵。

    4長期分鐘,條例草案在pipe.He可以看到nothing.Everything是black.Then比爾看到一些blue.What是什麼?什麼是結束時的管?這是藍色的天空!法案是不可能的管!他在血泊中的水在核電廠plant.Luckily ,沒有泵結束時的pipe.There只是一批water.Aworker在核能法案規劃署退出了water.Bill了幾年削減對他的腿和胳膊,但他並沒有真正受到傷害。

    條例草案有一個新的愛好now.He doessn't潛水dive.He收集郵票

    ................................

    ^0^

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  • 彥名
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Bill lamm喜歡潛水活動,他喜歡在深海裡看到漂亮的植物跟魚,他也喜歡寧靜。

    有一個星期六下午Bill在佛羅里達海岸附近潛水,在他尋找一些漂亮的魚時,海水突然將他往下拉,他趕快往上游,但海水又將他往下拉。Bill往下看到海底有一條16呎的水管,海水把Bill拉向那條水管,Bill再一次往上游,但海水又把他往下拉。

    幾秒後Bill已經被拉到水管裡面了,而且海水還是繼續拉他,他會被拉到哪裡呢?水管的盡頭是什麼呢? Bill這才想到,附近有個核能電廠,這條水管是通往核能電廠的,那水管的盡頭是什麼呢?可能是一個抽水馬達....

    Bill在這水管裡待了漫長的四分鐘,當時Bill看不到東西,一片黑暗,此時Bill看到藍色的東西,是什麼呢?水管的盡頭是什麼呢?Bill看到的是藍天,Bill終於脫離水管,他現在在核能電廠的水池裡,幸運地,水管的盡頭沒有馬達,而是一個水池,有個工人將Bill從水池中拉起來,Bill並沒有真正受傷,只有在手跟腳上有一些割傷。

    Bill現在有一個新的嗜好,他不再潛水,他開始集郵。

    2009-06-18 17:28:50 補充:

    下面的大大,如果你只是將我翻的中文拿去潤飾,那就不是英翻中,而是中文修辭~~~~~XD

    在這翻譯一陣子,遇到很多人為了點數把我翻的中文內容美化而得到最佳解答....XD

    2009-06-19 09:01:05 補充:

    Hi小麥~如有誤會之處,敬請見諒。

    因為發現在英文分類裡面存在許多中文修辭的專家,會把別人的原創,包裝成自己的作品^^

    Source(s): 用心翻譯的自己,拒用翻譯軟體
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