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薔薇 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

這一句英文,請幫忙修正,好嗎? 謝謝喔^^

這一句英文,請幫忙修正,好嗎? 謝謝喔^^

小妹練習的是中翻英,

中文是原文,

英文才是小妹自己寫的,

希望有熱心的英文高手,幫我看看有沒有錯誤的地方喔!

謝謝^^

我很喜歡XX書裏面的一句/一段話,所以想提出來和你一起分享。

I like a sentence/ paragraph in the XX book, so I want to point out to share with you.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hi, Rose,

    I really like this passage from XXX and I would like to share it with you.

    Or, when not mention the name of the book:

    I really like this passage in a book and I would like to share it with you.

    -------------------------------

    Just remind you that every first letter of a name has to be capital.

    example: The Pursuit Of Holiness, Abide In Christ (names of book)

    Bless,

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  • 1 decade ago

    我很喜歡XX書裏面的一句/一段話

    是我的話會著樣翻譯~

    I like a sentence/ paragraph in the book xxx very much , so I would like to mention it (to)and share it with you together.

    如果要表達出是''很''喜歡

    ** 建議你在前面或後面加上 very much~

    我加在後面是因為會念起來比較順~

    point out = 指出來

    *point out 通常是用來"提醒" 而 "指出" 一件事~

    不全然是因為喜歡一件事而提出

    ...to share with / and share with ...好跟你分享/...也跟你分享

    兩者的差別不大~都有何你一起

    想= want 是沒錯

    **不過建議用would like to 因為比較正式也聽起來比較順耳~

    *看你是用在哪裡瞜~^-^

    一起分享的一起也沒關心到喔~

    所以我也加的一個 together.~

    希望對你有幫助瞜~

    加油~^-^

    Source(s): 我~自~己~阿~
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  • 1 decade ago

    I really like the sentence/ paragraph in the xx book, therefore I would like to share with you.

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  • 小麥
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    1 decade ago

    I really like a sentence/paragraph in the XX book, so I would like to point out to share with you.

    但是我覺得用 point out感覺怪怪的,但想不出更恰當的字了,如果是我,我會說:

    I really like one of the sentences/paragraphs in the XX book, so I would like to share with you.

    因為我覺得 point out 可省略,是我個人的想法,供妳參考。

    Source(s): My brain
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