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I took a trip to 墾丁 last summer.

我去年夏天到墾丁去旅遊.

It sounds not spctial, right?

這聽起來並不特別,對八?

But, L believe that this trip to 墾丁 is one of the most special trip I have had, because I went there by a BICYCLE!

但,我相信這一趟墾丁之旅會是我所經歷過最特別的旅遊之一,因為,我是騎著腳踏車去墾丁的!

This trip took us, my father brother and me, five days.

這趟旅程花了我們....我和爸爸,弟弟......五天的時間.

On the trip, we did not stay in hotels, motels, or B&Bs.

在旅程中,我們並沒有住在旅館,汽車旅館,或是民宿.

(我不清楚民宿是不是那樣寫,也請指點一下)

We asked the staffs of elementary schools on the way for a empty classroom, sleeping on the floor with a sleeping bag.

我們向路上上小學的值班人員請求一間空教室,並且帶著睡袋睡在地板上.

In summer, the temporature is very high at twelve to three o'clock.

在夏天,中午十二點到下午三點的溫度縱是特別高.

So we often took a nap at convenient shops or 簡餐店 s which have air conditioner in.

所以我們總是在有冷氣的便利商店或簡餐店睡個午覺.

(不好意思,我查不到簡餐店怎麼拼)

It was painful to ride 118 kms a day on the trip.

在旅程中,一天之內騎完118公里是很令人痛苦的.

But when we came back to home after finishing the 400kms trip and felt extremely 有成就感, that cause nothing.

但,當我們結束了400公里的旅程回到家,並感到極度的有成就感時,那些就不算什麼了(指上一句一天騎完118公里)

(如果知道"有成就感"這個單字也請告訴我,謝謝)

這是老師今天出明天就要報告的作業

真的很需要各位幫忙

即使是一點點也好!

謝謝!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    安安

    我來幫助你吧

    I took a trip to 墾丁 last summer.

    我去年夏天到墾丁去旅遊.

    It sounded nothing spctial, didn't it?

    這聽起來並不特別,對八?

    But, I believe that this trip to 墾丁 was one of the most special trips that I have ever had- because I went there by bicycle!

    但,我相信這一趟墾丁之旅會是我所經歷過最特別的旅遊之一,因為,我是騎著腳踏車去墾丁的!

    This trip took us, including my father, brother and I, five days.

    這趟旅程花了我們....我和爸爸,弟弟......五天的時間.

    On the trip, we did not stay in hotels, motels, nor B&Bs. [ boarding house]

    在旅程中,我們並沒有住在旅館,汽車旅館,或是民宿.

    (我不清楚民宿是不是那樣寫,也請指點一下)

    On the way , we asked the staff of elementary schools for an empty classroom to sleep on the floor with a sleeping bag.

    我們向路上上小學的值班人員請求一間空教室,並且帶著睡袋睡在地板上.

    In summer, the temperature was very high between twelve to three o'clock.

    在夏天,中午十二點到下午三點的溫度縱是特別高.

    So we often took a nap at convenient shops or 簡餐店 fast fooderies with air-conditioning on.

    所以我們總是在有冷氣的便利商店或簡餐店睡個午覺.

    (不好意思,我查不到簡餐店怎麼拼)

    It was painful to ride 118 km a day on the trip.

    在旅程中,一天之內騎完118公里是很令人痛苦的.

    But when we came back home after finishing the 400km trip and felt extremely 有成就感accomplished, that meant for nothing.

    但,當我們結束了400公里的旅程回到家,並感到極度的有成就感時,那些就不算什麼了(指上一句一天騎完118公里)

    (如果知道"有成就感"這個單字也請告訴我,謝謝)

    成就,英文有幾種表達方式:

    achieve/accomplish/to bring home the bacon

    有甚麼...感覺

    可以說:have a sense of ...

    再把成就這個動詞轉化成名詞,就能夠放上去了。

    Have a sense of achievement/accomplisment.

    至於甚麼感覺:a sense of ...

    以上回答提供參考

    祝身體健康 天天開心

    2009-06-13 01:38:27 補充:

    1.建議全篇採用過去式

    2.需要加強拼音,單字要背熟。

    3.片語/俚語需要多背。

    加油

    Source(s): 自己+奇摩
  • 1 decade ago

    i went to a trip last summer

    it sound not special

    but i think this trip to 墾丁 is the most special trip i have had,

    because i went there to brought a bicycle

    i went to 墾丁 with my dad and my brother it tooks us five days

    on the trip we did't stay at the hotel or motel

    we ask the stuff of the school for a empty class to sleep with a slepping bag

    in summer the temperature was very high in the afternoon

    so we take a nap at the shop or the restaurant because they got aircon

    it was very painful to ride 118kms in a trip on a day

    but when we got back home after 400kms ride we felt very achieve with our trip

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