琨崧 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

誰能幫我修改英文自傳錯誤的地方!!謝謝!

Family background

My name is YANG, WAN-SIN , I was born in Zhanghua and graduated in Zen Del senior high school , I grew up in a sweety family and have six members in my family. They are grandma,parents, two brothers and I . My parents to manage a Food stand,

They are very democratizaton (民主化) for teach me , they request me to do any matter to feel for others and taught me to of the elder should be politeness, to of the same generation proper(適當) respect(尊重) ,

to younger generation(輩份) proper friendly . In study aspect(方面) ,They did not hope that give me the too tremendous pressure so that let me to be possible to express own opinion

Individuality description

My parents taught me must be conscientious since in my childhood, because my father was very early to enter the society. Cause me to be very independent and treat people kindly and Willingness (自動自發) ,I am a curious(好奇) girl since in my childhood ,on every account must discover the truth ,Because also I have learned very many things , I always requirements myself to achieve(達到) perfectly when I do any thing

Studies the course

When I enter the Zen Del high school , the discipline rigorous school ,Promote(促進) individual

(個人的) standard(水準) raise , I always listen earnestly in the class and completes momentarily(隨時)preparing a lesson, causes me understand quickly curriculum (課程) ,In this takes in the environment which enters a higher school , Grasps the time ,Studies diligently(勤奮地) is the most basic principle(原則), I once was to serve as Academic section chief (學藝) , Hygienic section chief(衛生) serves chief(服務) I can serve for the class let me prepare the feeling to be honored(榮幸)

During the study process, no matter comes across any setback(挫折)I never had given up .

For my goal, I will have insisted finally

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  • 1 decade ago
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    1.

    My name is YANG, WAN-Sin, born in Zhanghua

    and graduated in Zen Del senior high school.

    2.

    There are five members in my sweet family,

    including my grandma, parents and two brothers.

    3.

    About my parents, they make money by running a food stand.

    Both of them are so democratic in teaching me

    to be a well-mannered citizen.

    4. As of studying, they never put too much pressure on me,

    so I can fully express my own opinion.

    Glad to help!

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    Source(s): Grace TA's contribution
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