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When I am also going study the country hour, some time fine
arts lessons, I have drawn one only then yellow, blue, the loose
skinned orange three kind of color charts, that is the seashore
which I most liked in childhood. But other schoolmates look
at the appointed time, actually ridiculed I said: “you draw
chart good rotten, has three kind of colors.”I at that time
really good sad, had not thought that teacher actually gently
patted my head saying:“only then three kind of colors have
any relations, teacher I very much like the chart which you
draw.”Now thinks that perhaps teacher at that time was only
is comforting me, but these words for me, are encourage, is
also praises, gave me to be self-confident.
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