大寶 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急!!! 作文中翻英 請英文高手幫忙 (20點)

因為本人作文能力也不是很好

所以文章看起來可能有點不順

請見諒

ps1:請不要用太困難的單字&文法 約高中程度就好

    (請不要用翻譯軟體)

ps2:分2段(只要內容一樣就好,分段的點或句子

    的順序可以調換)

-------------------------我是分隔線-------------------------

  當我還在就讀國小時,有一次的美術課,我畫了一

張只有黃、藍、橘三種顏色的圖,那是我小時候最喜歡

去的海邊。但其他同學看到時,卻嘲笑我說:「你畫的

圖好爛喔,只有三種顏色而已。」我當時真的好難過,

沒想到老師卻輕輕的拍著我的頭說:「只有三種顏色有

什麼關係,老師我就很喜歡你畫的圖啊。」

  現在想想,也許老師當時只是在安慰我,但這句話

對我來說,是鼓勵,也是讚美,更給了我自信。

Update:

To 圓寶

那個...

您的翻譯怎麼讀起來有點怪怪的!?

大小寫&換行的點可以稍微改一下嗎?

不知道是我的錯覺還是...

這有點像某翻譯軟體的作品@@

如有冒犯請見諒 -.-

Update 2:

各位大大不好意思...

在編輯時可以善用"Enter"嗎?

不然"favorite"被分成"fav"和"orite"實在很難看懂~"~

話說真的是我的英文太差嗎!?

怎麼前2篇都怪怪的ˊˋ

Update 3:

希望有更多不同版本的翻譯

我會從裡面找出我覺得最好的一篇當作最佳解答

(沒錯字.沒用翻譯軟體.文法正確.文義通順)

在此感謝大家的協助

4 Answers

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Dr.eye: When I am still studying in the primary school, there is fine

    arts lesson of once, I drew a picture that have yellow, blue,

    tangerines only three kinds of colors, that is the seashore where I

    liked most as a child.

    When other classmates see, but laugh at me and say: ' the picture

    which you drew is rotten well oh, only three kinds of colors.

    I was really very sad at that time, have never expected Mr.'s head

    that but the gentle one makes me is said: ' only three kinds of colors

    have any relation, I like the picture which you drew very much, the

    teacher.

    Think about it now, perhaps the teacher was just comforting me at

    that time, but this sentence is being encouraged for me, it is the

    praise too, it is self-confident to give to me even more.

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  • 1 decade ago

    When I was in the study country hour, some time fine arts lessons, I have also drawn one

    only then yellow, blue, the loose skinned orange three kind of color charts, that is a seashore which I most

    liked in childhood.But other schoolmates look at the appointed time, ridiculed actually I said: “You draw

    chart good rotten oh, only then three kind of colors.” I at that time really good sad,

    had not thought teacher gently pats my head to say actually: “Only then three kind of colors have

    any relations, teacher I on the chart which likes you drawing very much.”

    The present thinks that, perhaps teacher at that time only was in comforts me, but this speech

    to me, is the encouragement, also is praises, gave me to be self-confident.

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  • 1 decade ago

    When I am also going study the country hour, some time fine arts lessons, I have drawn one only then yellow, blue, the loose skinned orange three kind of color charts, that is the seashore which I most liked in childhood. But other schoolmates look at the appointed time, actually ridiculed I said: “you draw chart good rotten, has three kind of colors.”I at that time really good sad, had not thought that teacher actually gently patted my head saying:“only then three kind of colors have any relations, teacher I very much like the chart which you draw.”   Now thinks that perhaps teacher at that time was only is comforting me, but these words for me, are encourage, is also praises, gave me to be self-confident.

    選我~~!

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  • 1 decade ago

    就是醬

    When I was studying the country-hour art class once, I drew a 1

    Zhang is only yellow, blue, and orange colors of the three plans, that was my childhood favorite

    To the seaside. However, other students can see, they laughed at me: "You're painting

    Figure rotten Oh well, only no more than three colors. "I was really good sorry

    Teachers did not expect it gently patting my head and said: "There are only three colors

    What is the relationship between the teacher I would like to draw your plans ah. "

    Think now, maybe the teacher was only comforted me, but words

    For me, is to encourage as well as praise, but also gave me confidence.

    部會很難8.

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