草米 asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請教~小學英文作文~!!

i am work hand in English writing. but i do not know i got many

mistakes. pleace point out the mistake to me. thank you!!

1. you are kally. write a letter to Angel, tell her your trip to London.

(80 words)

i done it below.

Dear Angel,

how are you? i hope you are doing well. my family and i were

came back Hong Kong from London last week.we stayed at a

beactiful 4-star hotel and enjoyed a fish and pizza. the weather of

London was rainy and foggy. we all went out with the raincoats.

we visted the London Eye which the biggest ferris wheel in the

world. i was so excited.

the people of London are friendly, the buildings of London are old

but beactiful. and than, i really like to eat the local food of London, it was delicious. i really want to go to London again. keep in touch.

Love,

Kelly

thank you very much!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Dear Angel,

    how are you? i hope you are doing well. my family and i were

    back (to Hong Kong) from London last week.we stayed in a

    beautiful 4-star hotel and enjoyed fish and pizza. the weather of

    London was rainy and foggy. we all went out with the raincoats.

    we visted the London Eye which the biggest ferris wheel in the

    world. i was so excited.

    the people in London are friendly, the buildings of London are old

    but beactiful. and than, i really like to eat the local food, it was delicious. i really want to go to London again. keep in touch.

    Love,

    Kelly

    quite a lot mistake

    do you have fish and pizza everyday?

    doublr 'really' at the end , you may think of some similar words e.g. so,very,truely/.......so much, etc

    Source(s): me
  • 1 decade ago

    good

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