旻秀 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

找出文法錯誤

可以請大家幫我找出哪裡文法有錯嗎?!謝謝

my part-time job is working in my aunt's bookstore.

I really love to work in this place.

my work are to manage bookstore's internet auction and serve the customer.

Sometimes I also have to hand out leaflets to passers-by.

To be frank,Ithink that handing outleaflets is very hard because I have to stand outside for a long time no matter the weather is cold or hot.

Sometimes some people takes a contemptuous attitude toward me.

They make me sad.

But I'll do my best to pull my weight.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    My part-time job is working in my aunt's bookstore.

    I really love to work in this place, my works are managing the bookstore's internet auction and serving the customers,(使用不定詞構句 to manage 也是正確的) sometimes, I also have to hand out the leaflets to passers-by.

    To be frank with you ( or Frankly speaking), I think that handing out leaflets is a very hard work, because I have to stand outside for a long time no matter what the weather is cold or hot, (天氣不只冷與熱,還有睛、雨天 、颱風天等) and sometimes, some people takes a contemptuous attitude toward me, which makes me sad, but I‘ll still do my best to pull my weight to this work. (使用do one’s best , 又用pull one’s weight 意思重複)

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  • 1 decade ago

    1.my part-time job is working in my aunt's bookstore.

    =>My part-time job is in my aunt’s bookstore.

    解釋:part-time job已經有在工作的含意, 跟 work在同一個句子裡,則累贅

    2.I really love to work in this place.

    => I really love working in this place.

    解釋:嚴格來說,love後面要加V-ing

    3.my work are to manage bookstore's internet auction and serve the customer.

    => My job is to manage Internet auction of the bookstore and to serve the customer.

    解釋:

    A.job跟work 的差異: http://www.jmnews.com.cn/web/template/content/cont...

    B.bookstore沒有生命,不能當作所有格用,必須寫成 xxx of bookstore

    C.平行結構,My job is to V1 and to V2,第二個to不可省喔

    4.Sometimes I also have to hand out leaflets to passers-by.

    => 這句是對的

    5.To be frank, Ithink that handing out leaflets is very hard because I have to stand outside for a long time no matter the weather is cold or hot.

    =>To be frank, I think that handing out leaflets is very hard because I have to stand outside for a long time no matter who the weather is.

    解釋:

    A.no matter 表示不論, 不顧, 引導讓步副詞子句, 後面必須與how, what, when, where, whether, which, who 等字連用; 有時用於句尾, 省略某些與主句主詞或受詞關係密切的成分。

    B.有how之後再加 is cold or hot 則為累贅

    6.Sometimes some people takes a contemptuous attitude toward me.

    =>Sometimes some people take a contemptuous attitude toward me.

    Or Sometimes some people are contemptuous of me.

    7.They make me sad.

    =>They do hurt my feeling. (改成這樣比較好)

    8. But I'll do my best to pull my weight.

    => 這句也是對的

    Source(s): 我考過GMAT
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