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History paper project 請幫幫我!!

我剛到國外讀書 American History 總是讓我很煩惱

要學期末了 我們有個很重要的 paper project

我現在十年級 暑假後就十一年級 我應該會上IB History

老師要我們先練習IB History 的 essay 有分六個部分

A: plan of the investigation

B: summary of evidence

C: evaluation of sources

D: analysis

E: sources and word limit

主題只要是有關美國歷史的都可以 老師有給我們看一個範例

那個主題是 The Election of 1876 and the End of Reconstruction

他要在 essay 中回答自己的問題是

How did the Election of 1876 symbolize the end of Reconstruction?

我不知道該選什麼主題才好??

我有考慮"解除奴隸制度和林肯總統的關係"

老師說問題最好要使用How 或 Why 才比較不會受限制

可以幫我想想看嗎???拜託拜託!!!!在禮拜一前要寫好A部分

Update:

我之前有做過關於林肯總統的 essay

我也有做過關於解除奴隸制度簡單的 essay

所以我也曾查過關於那方面的資料

我想說題目這樣好不好

President Abraham Lincoln and the End of Slavary

現在就是要探討林肯總統和解除奴隸制度的關係

Update 2:

sorry~ 是 Slavery

Update 3:

很謝謝有你的幫忙!! 對 我得再補充一下

這 paper project 不可以超過1000個字(標點符號應該不算吧?)

A部分應該要包含

state the topic of the investigation, which should be formulated as a question

define the scope of investigation

explain the method of the investigation

老師給我們看的範例 他A部分只有寫9行(一段)

所以我覺得應該不用寫那麼多 我有修改一下

等一下傳給你看看

Update 4:

我沒辦法寫信給你...不接受網友寫信

那我直接把A部分放上來

Update 5:

President Abraham Lincoln took an important role in liberty. American Civil War completely consumed Lincoln’s administration.

Update 6:

During the war, he not only wanted to win the war to reunite the country but also wanted to put an end to slavery. The history about Abraham Lincoln and the end of slavery is quite clear stated in many papers, but how and why President Lincoln conducted to end the slavery is

Update 7:

interesting to me. I chose this topic in order to answer my question: “How did President Abraham Lincoln symbolize the end of Slavery?” Consequently, I researched my topic using our history textbook and reliable

Update 8:

online sources to have a better knowledge and information of this subject. I tried to study how the idea of ending slavery forming, and became President Lincoln’s believe; and why he decided to sacrifice himself on this idea and makes it his lifetime-career.

Update 9:

抱歉抱歉 我發現原來是我不接受網友來信==

Update 10:

真的太感謝您的幫忙了 那我先把點數給您

我再寄信和您討論!!

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  • 安安
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    我現在要回到廠區宿舍,沒法在一個小時內給你答案。

    先讀這些資料,看有沒有靈感。如果晚上可連上線,我再和你討論。

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abraham_Lincoln

    2009/M/15, 17:10' West Indonesia

    2009-05-16 10:43:01 補充:

    這個題目很大,對於高中一年級學生而言也不易深入。

    因為關於林肯的廢奴,即使林肯自己的心路歷程也是一步步慢慢成形的,不是像故事書裏寫的那麼簡單。

    因為你急著要趕在星期一前完成A部份,今天我還有工作在手上,只怕沒時間完成所有的5個章節,所以我們先討論如何Plan the investigation.

    President Abraham Lincoln and the end of slavery

    A. Plan of the investigation

    The history about Abraham Lincoln (1809-1865) and the end of slavery is quite clear stated in many papers, but how and why President Lincoln conducted to end the slavery is interesting to me.

    I plan first to read the article about Abraham Lincoln from web directories, I’ll read as many as possible reference that is available from the internet webs. It will take me about one week to do this.

    After all possible information collected (from the internet), I plan to search from the school library, try to study how the idea of ending slavery forming, and became President Lincoln’s believe; and why he decided to sacrifice himself on this idea and makes it his lifetime-career.

    It is difficult to really understand the way of how President Lincoln thinks, but I’ll try to study the social environmental background in his childhood and his school days and how he learn to became a successful lawyer.

    I’ll try to understand from his early days in his career as a lawyer; and in the Illinois House of Representatives, as a County representative. And his first protest against slavery.

    I think to do investigation from these details will give me more clear image of how and why President Lincoln forming his mind about against slavery.

    B, C, D, E 都得等你開始蒐集資料後才能寫喔!

    我得先完成我手上的工作,我給部下出了題下星期三進行Seed Science的 Seminar. 我自已負責給他們講評Seed Test methods, and traps 分 tricks in the procedure.

    剩下的我會寫信和你討論。

    2009-05-16 10:50:55 補充:

    不對!是你應該寫信問我才對。只要點選我的代號就可以。

    By the way, 我女兒名叫庭楨,剛嫁了,所以花時間幫同名的小女兒。

    2009-05-17 01:23:35 補充:

    哇!寫得比我還好,現在的年輕人有希望了。

    我宿舍連線狀況很差,明丰會再進辦公室。你有新補充我會看。

    2009-05-17 01:28:20 補充:

    我的知識檔可接受網友寫信啊!不過沒關係,直接補充就好了,我會追蹤問題進展。

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  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

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  • 123
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    唉 雖然成績超慘的說== 還是很感謝有您的幫忙!!

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