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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

修正改正這篇英文 好像文意不順 給點建議 ok?

修正改正這篇英文 好像文意不順 給點建議 ok?

請明確指出不對的地方(要告訴我那裡不對)

要給解釋

不要只給ans

謝謝 20pt 選為最佳ans 就有40pt

請協助我一下

do you think i attractive

tell me

now

i want the answer now

don't keep me waiting

i don't wanna wait

teling me

do you know

all this time i do always think of you

do you know how the feel

i toss and turn my bed all night

do you know

i want you inside

inside of me

i want you come into my imagenation fantasy world

i want share all my secret for you

it's just you no someone else

you are a saxaul poison

and it's drivng me insane

that's all you do

you have a magic

make it work on me

why you make me cursh on you and crazy about you

i really don't wanna play hode and seek

but why

in the real world

you are a old man

and i am a young girl

why you are my king

and i willing to do the slave for you

why how can you atractive for me ?

how did you do that

taech me

my handsome teacher

i willing to do your student

you know what ?

when you can say something real to me

when you will show real feeling to me

when i can always be with you

and don't saprative

now i open my door

and let you get in

to see and enjoy all the wonderful tasty farvast for you

why you don't come

do something

you do touch my heart

don't you silly guy you don't know nothing

come

let's do it

i born to make you happy

Update:

非常的感謝您 PCH ( 初學者 5 級 )

嗯 其實我那句是要寫hide and seek啦

Update 2:

請問ET小仙

你想表達什麼

是想要告訴我這篇文像歌詞還是..........

3 Answers

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  • 1 decade ago
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    do you think i am attractive - 因為i 是第一人稱

    i want the answer -因為你ㄉ前面有now 了所以這裡不用在加

    don't keep me waiting - 把這句刪掉 因為下面又說 i don't wanna wait

    teling me 改成 tell me

    all this time i do always think of you 改成 i all the time think of you 或 i always think of you 因為文法不對

    do you know how the feel 改成 do you know how i feel 因為前面那一句你沒有主詞

    i toss and turn my bed all night 改成 i toss and turn my bed all the night 因為..... 這樣比較順

    i want you inside inside of me 改成 i want you get inside of me 因為大概同樣的意思不用兩次

    i want you come into my imagenation fantasy world 把 imagenation fantasy world 改成 imaginational world

    i want share all my secret for you 改成 i want to share all my secret to you 因為文法不對

    it's just you no someone else 改成 it just only you no someone else 因為文法不對

    you are a saxaul poison 沒有 saxaul 此字所以查一下字典吧

    and it's drivng me insane 改成 and it's make me insane 因為解釋錯誤

    that's all you do 改成 that are all the thing you did

    why you make me cursh on you and crazy about you 沒有 cursh此字

    i really don't wanna play hode and seek 應該是hope

    you are a old man 是 an

    and i willing to do the slave for you 改成 and i willing to be the slave for you 因為文法不對

    why how can you atractive for me ? 改成 how can you atractive for me ? why? 因為不可以兩ㄍ問題同時問

    when you can say something real to me 改成 when you say something true to me 因為文法不對

    and don't saprative 改成 and don't separate 因為這樣比較好

    don't you silly guy you don't know nothing 改成 don't you silly guy you don't know anythings

    (按照順序看下來,我沒寫的就是OK的,改完後再抄一遍吧)

    Source(s): 沒有參考資料但是有參考我的頭腦
  • 槑仙
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    你好!

    歌詞都是這麼唱~

    all night long

    share......with you

    crush on you

    and it's you drivng me crazy/insane

    I'm willing to be your...

    How could you be so atractive to me?

    Don't be a silly guy and pretending you know nothing.

    I'm born to...

    ~大概是這樣~

  • 阿信
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    可以把中文寫出來嗎?

    這樣才知道你要表達什麼意思!

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