I can't find any poetry terms in this poem, help !!?

Im trying to find any 5 poetry terms such as like metaphor, imagery , stanza, rhythm, irony, alliteration and paradox and so on. But i cant find any in following lyrics

Taking a nap all day long.

There's nobody disturbs me

but I just can't feel free.

There's no hope There's no despair

only the anger remained into my heart.

There's no chance and there's no clue

You've gone so faraway I'm hiding myself from you

I hate myself who can't stop loving you

I feel so stupid because I'm stil in love with you

Fall over precipice but there's no one can rescue me

My heart has broken two pieces I can't love you anymore

LaLaLaLa~

It's hard for me to go on my life

without you

I'm suffering from insomnia

I'm dying day and day

(could you find 5 poetry terms and describe please?? if isn't any poetry terms there than would you find onother song lyric and describe it ?)

Please help me... and thanks alot

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Start off by replacing yourself with another thing...like a butterfly....that would be a metaphor.

    'I'm sleeping so well, I'm up all night'...irony.

    The imagery comes in when you replace vague words with concrete terms...'my door key had dulled with your hands'

    Structure the lines, after revision, with definite syllables, like 8-5-8-5 or some other consistent syllabic count.

    Alliteration is like....'snowbound scent of cold, folding air around me'...

    You can do it!!!

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  • 1 decade ago

    Taking a nap all day long.

    There's nobody disturbs me

    but I just can't feel free.

    There's no hope There's no despair

    only the anger remained into my heart.

    There's no chance and there's no clue

    You've gone so faraway I'm hiding myself from you

    I hate myself who can't stop loving you

    I feel so stupid because I'm stil in love with you

    Fall over precipice but there's no one can rescue me

    My heart has broken two pieces I can't love you anymore

    1.

    Figurative Language 'My heart has broken two pieces' When really it hasnt. That is a poetry term.

    2.

    'anger remained into my heart.' Is figurative Language as your heart doesnt literally have anger inside it.

    3.

    Taking a nap all day long.

    I doubt they really took a nap ALL DAY LONG. Fake. I dont know the term though, sorry.

    4. rescue me

    I dont know fully but rescue me. You dotn really need RESCUING so it is figurative language i think.

    Thats all I can think of. Explain to your teacher that its harda dn expalin why.

    Hope i helped xx

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  • 1 decade ago

    The only two terms that I can find are

    "Ode" and "Form"

    there's no hope there's nO DEspair

    it's hard FOR Me to go on my life

    Sorry.. I searched about 50 poetry terms.. but nothing..

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