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Recenlty,Mexico was erupt swine flu of pandemic .World Health Organization(WHO) was issue warning of swine flu.In addition that had been lift warn level to four for could become a global epidemic .Mexican health workers test have confirmed more than one hunred case was infect and death .Athority have been isoate... show more Recenlty,Mexico was erupt swine flu of pandemic .World Health Organization(WHO) was issue warning of swine flu.In addition that had been lift warn level to four for could become a global epidemic .Mexican health workers test have confirmed more than one hunred case was infect and death .Athority have been isoate people of have swine flu strain for preventing epidemic of eruption.WHO urged global country make perform of defense from swine flu.

相信要各位全篇改,但請幫忙~~~
因為我想學寫,但無人幫手改~~~
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