Recenlty,Mexico was erupt swine flu of pandemic .
was erupt - erupt 係動詞, 如果係被動式was / were 後面的動詞係erupted, 即was / were erupted, 而用被動式在這句子中係唔正確的。
pandemic係形容詞, 用法係形容一啲嘢, 你在句子裏係當佢係名詞咁用, 是不正確的。
這個句子, 你係用chinese-english直譯寫成英文, 寫法唔通。
Recently, Mexico has an outbreak of a new kind of pandemic disease called swine flu.
The World Health Organization(WHO) issued the warning of swine flu.
World Health Organization一定要有 "The"在前面。
如果用 "was issue"都係用錯文法, 解釋和 "was erupt"一樣。
In addition that had been lift warn level to four for could become a global epidemic .
In addition, the WHO has raised the warning level from four to level five because the epidemic have the chance to be globalized.
Mexican health workers test have confirmed more than one hunred case was infect and death .
Authority have been isoate people of have swine flu strain for preventing epidemic of eruption.
"authority"係唔會被隔離, 係 "people"被人隔離, 你又用錯被動式 "have been isolated", 被動式又欠過去分詞 "isolated"。
People have been isolated by the authority for prevention of the spread of swine flu.
WHO urged global country make perform of defense from swine flu.
"make" 和 "perform" 都係動詞, "country" 要複數, 因有很多個國家。
The WHO urged global countries to contain the spread of swine flu.