小o asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我校正文法或是修飾字辭~~~~急(英文高手請不要走!!!)

如果你有更好的翻法或是看到我文法上的錯誤或是用詞不當

請盡量提出來,本人在此超感激您的!!!(最重要是我時態的問題)

棚內主播(anchor):

vivi公司總裁的女兒昨天上午被目擊者目擊騎著摩托車跌倒

(vivi company's president daughter was witnessed to ride a motocycle and tumbled yesterday morning)

不可思議的是,他現在行蹤不明

(But it is incredibling that her whereabouts still a mystery)

現在為您連接到現場

(翻不出來= =外國的新聞會怎樣翻ㄋ???給我一點意見)

特派員(correspondent):

現在我們來到了vivi公司

(Now,we have arrived this vivi company)

公司的發言人表示目前還沒有總經理的消息

(vivi company's spokesman expresses they have no any news about their general manager presently)

而且不幸的是,總裁因為不能接受這個打擊而中風

(Additionally,it is unfortunately that their president had a stroke because he can't believe accident about his daughter)

目前在醫院觀察

He was observing in the hospital(我也不知道該怎樣翻 !!就照字面翻ㄌ!!請各位幫忙修一下@@)

Update:

報導新聞應該會出現的字詞或是不該出現的字詞

我知道我翻的一點都不專業 希望常看CNN之類的外國新聞可以大力幫忙一下!!

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  • ricky
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Without Google or Yahoo translator:

    (總裁 = chief executive officer (CEO))

    棚內主播(anchor):

    vivi公司總裁的女兒昨天上午被目擊者目擊騎著摩托車跌倒

    (The daughter of vivi company's CEO was witnessed to tumble out of her moving motorcycle yesterday morning)

    不可思議的是,他現在行蹤不明

    (It is inconceivable that she is still missing after the incident)

    現在為您連接到現場

    (Now let's hear what our reporter at vivi company has to say)

    特派員(reporter):

    現在我們來到了vivi公司

    (Now, we are here at vivi.)

    公司的發言人表示目前還沒有總經理的消息

    (Vivi's spokesman previously said that there was no any updated news yet about their general manager)

    而且不幸的是,總裁因為不能接受這個打擊而中風

    (Additionally, their CEO unfortunately had a stroke after hearing what had happened to his daughter)

    目前在醫院觀察

    He is now under observation in the hospital.

    Source(s): ME staying & studying in the US
  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    到下面的網址看看吧

    ▶▶http://*****

  • 玉煖
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    不好意思借一下位置.我想要請Ricky幫忙翻譯.因為蠻急的.Ricky可以麻煩您加入我的msn嗎?zoe7164@hotmail.com.謝謝!

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