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天天 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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According to the editorial, it is deserve for us to pay attention to the suicide problems, and the government should make efforts to guard suicide thought with rising suicide rate. The author thinks that it is emphasis to training young people’s sprit to withstand the blows.

Regretting to know the suicide rate rising, I think suicide is a serious problem, opposing to deal with the problems in suicide. In fact, not only did they end their lives, but they made their friends sad and family broken. So it is important to retain the positive attitude and never defeated by blows. Having thought twice before making any irrational decision, you might change all your live.

這是一篇社論的概要和心得

我的作文有規定要使用否定句倒裝句和分詞構句(各一句)

麻煩幫我看看全篇文法使用的對不對和文章順不順

((因為我實在是分辨不出來對或錯阿))

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  • Bruce
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    According to an editorial, the suicide problem deserves public attention. Our government should prevent suicide rate from rising at this point. The author of the editorial thinks that it is essential to educate young people on how to fight against disconsolations and emotional breakdowns.

    With the rising suicide rate, I think that suicide has become a major social issue. Suicide victims refuse to face the heart of the problem and make a wrong choice. In fact, not only did they end their lives, but they disappointed their friends and families. So it is important to retain a positive attitude and never defeated by disconsolations. Having thought twice before making an irrational decision, you might change your whole life.

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  • 阿彬
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    一樓大大的解答已近完美,但只要在never後面加上be就完全正確了。點數給一樓。

    Source(s): 多年英文教學經驗
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