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After knowing the differences of the characters’ appearance between these two programs, what about the stories in them? The styles of the stories are pretty different. SpongeBob is a story that the main character, SpongeBob who lives under the sea. He has a good friend, Patrick Star, they always play games together and he has a good job, though his boss is not so good because he is always mad at anything. Squidward is another co-worker in this Burger shop. All the stories in SpongeBob are surrounded by these characters, some times the issue discussed in SpongeBob is insinuating about human beings. For example, SpongeBob once saw lots of fishhooks, he thought these things were fun to play with because they could pull him highly. But his boss warned him, “it would make you die!” It seems that SpongeBob is just a funny program, in fact, there have more lessons in it. How about Teletubiess? It has four main characters. Tinky Winky, a boy who is the oldest one. Dipsy, he is a black who likes a hat which has a picture of cow on it. Laa-Laa, she is in the yellow race. Po, she is the youngest in Teletubbies. In Teletubbies’ stories, they always playing around and do nothing. The most important point in Teletubbies is that they will redo their actions or repeat their words. Just like the little children, they follow their bent. In short, SpongeBob and Teletubbies are fit into different ages, that’s why their style are so different.

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    1. what about the stories in them?

    => what do the stories describe?

    2. SpongeBob is a story that the main character, SpongeBob who lives under the sea.

    => SpongeBob is the main character of the story, who lives under

    the sea.

    3. He has a good friend, Patrick Star, they always play games together and he has a good job, though his boss is not so good because he is always mad at anything.

    => Patrick Star is his good friend and they always paly games

    together. Although he has a good job, his boss is not good

    because he is always mad at anything.

    4. All the stories in SpongeBob are surrounded by these characters, some times the issue discussed in SpongeBob is insinuating about human beings.

    => All the stories of SpongeBob are surrounded by these

    characters. Sometimes the issue which discussed in SpongeBob

    is insinuating about human beings.

    5. For example, SpongeBob once saw lots of fishhooks, he thought these things were fun to play with because they could pull him highly.

    => For example, SpongeBob once saw lots of fishhooks and

    thought that they were fun to play with because they could pull

    him highly.

    6. But his boss warned him, “it would make you die!”

    => However, his boss warned him, "It would make you die."

    7. Tinky Winky, a boy who is the oldest one.

    => Tinky Winky is the oldest boy.

    8. Dipsy, he is a black who likes a hat which has a picture of cow on it.

    => Dipsy is a balck who likes a hat is with a picture of cow on it.

    9. Laa-Laa, she is in the yellow race.

    => Laa-Laa is in the yellow race.

    10. Po, she is the youngest in Teletubbies.

    => Po is the youngest girl in Teletubbies.

    2009-04-30 11:58:32 補充:

    11. In Teletubbies’ stories, they always playing around and do nothing.

    => In Teletubbies' stories, they always play around and do

    nothing.

    2009-04-30 11:58:41 補充:

    12. SpongeBob and Teletubbies are fit into different ages, that’s why their style are so different.

    => SpongeBob and Teletubbies are fit into different ages and

    that's why their styles are so different.

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