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Good evening, ladies and gentleman. Welcome to join my dear uncle

John's wedding. Everyone are the most beautiful woman and the hand

some guys. Today I'm the host, Jessica Wu. I'm glad to be here to con

gratulate my dear uncle and aunt. I appreciate them to give me this

chance to deliver a speech. They study in the university of Tokyo.

They are classmate and fall in love in foreign country. What a

romantic things!My uncle is a humorous and hard-working person.

He is a very excellent person. He can play many instruments,such as

piano,gitar, and Jazz drum. My aunt is a simply but her temper is bad.

Congratulations! Wish you can be the most happiness groom and

bride. Thank you very much.

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    Good evening, ladies and gentleman. Welcome to join my dear uncle John's wedding party.

    (Everyone are the most beautiful woman and the handsome guys. (這是很中式說法, 建議可省略, 或可加 Wish all of you will have a good time tonight.)

    I'm Jessica Wu. I'm glad to be here to congratulate my uncle and aunt, and I also appreciate them giving me this chance to deliver a speech.

    They studied in the university of Tokyo. They were (因為過去是同學, 所以不用are) classmates(要加s) and felt (過去式) in love at that time.

    How romantic!

    My uncle has a good sense of humor and he is also a nice person. (很幽默又工作認真以中文來說似乎很正常, 但以英文來說有點不對等, 所以個人覺得用nice person 較好)

    He can play many instruments, such as piano, gitar, and Jazz drum.

    Anyway, he is a very excellent person.

    And about my aunt, she is a beautiful and simply girl.(宴會上bad temper 就不用說了, 除非你故意給她難看)

    Let us wishing them to be the most happiness couple in the world.

    Source(s): me
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