麵包蟲 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

超急 幫我訂正這偏英文文章.20點.要正確無誤

重點是文法.國字參考.

What is internet? (1)It is a speedy gateway that offers us convenience. (2)It is a gateway that offers us convenience and swiftness. But what can we use it for? Is it for work, entertainment or shopping? There is no need to doubt. Everything you can think of, whether it is chatting, receiving mails or watching the news, internet can help you in achieving it.

網路是什麼?(1)它是提供我們方便的快捷管道(2)它是提供我們方便快捷的管道.那我們又能利用它做些什麼呢?是辦公,娛樂,還是購物?不用懷疑!你所能夠想到的,不論是聊天.收信.看新聞,網路都能幫你完成!

Most of all, it has a function that can’t be dismissed, which is learning. Internet comes handy (1) for any question you might have (2) when you face a question and no one is around to answer. From ancient time to modern age and from national to international, any kind of knowledge can be found through a computer and an internet wire/cable. Isn’t this magical? Therefore we should be more grateful that we were born in this era and treasure this technology that we have now. After comprehending the meaning of internet, if anyone ever asks you again the question of “What can we do on the internet?”. You can answer back loudly and confidently with “We can use it for anything and everything!”. 但是還有一樣不可忽視的功能,那就是”學習”(1)當你有任何問題(2) 當你遇到問題時而旁邊又沒有指導者的時候,這時網路就派上用場了,不論是古今中外各類知識,一台電腦,一條網路線就能幫你解答,這是不是很神奇呢?因此,我們要更加慶幸自己生存在這個世代並且珍惜現在所擁有的這項科技,領悟到這點之後,之後當有人再問到你:What can we do on the internet?你就能大聲且自信的回答:我們可以利用它做任何事!

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我看不太懂阿!

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  • 阿蔡
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    1 decade ago
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  • 1 decade ago

    網路是什麼?(1)它是提供我們方便的快捷管道(2)它是提供我們方便快捷的管道.那我們又能利用它做些什麼呢?是辦公,娛樂,還是購物?不用懷疑!你所能夠想到的,不論是聊天.收信.看新聞,網路都能幫你完成!

    What is the Internet? (1)It is a fast gateway providing us with convenience. (2)Then what can we do with it? to work, for entertainment or for shopping? No doubt, all that you think about, even chatting, receiving e-mails or watching the news, internet can accomplish for you!

    但是還有一樣不可忽視的功能,那就是”學習”(1)當你有任何問題(2) 當你遇到問題時而旁邊又沒有指導者的時候,這時網路就派上用場了,不論是古今中外各類知識,一台電腦,一條網路線就能幫你解答,這是不是很神奇呢?因此,我們要更加慶幸自己生存在這個世代並且珍惜現在所擁有的這項科技,領悟到這點之後,之後當有人再問到你:What can we do on the internet?你就能大聲且自信的回答:我們可以利用它做任何事!

    It also has an important function that can't be dismissed--learning. Internet comes handy (1) for any question you have or(2) whenever you have a question ,but no one can solve it for you. From ancient times to the present day , from country to country, one computer with an internet cable obtains any kinds of knowledge. How magical! therefore, we should be more grateful to be born in this new era and should treasure the technology around us. Knowing that, when someone asks you “What can we do on the internet?”,“anything we want!!”you must answer back loudly with confidence.

    2009-04-23 17:17:48 補充:

    如果中文是你自己想的,建議你在這段中文字 ---(1)當你有任何問題(2) 當你遇到問題時 ----->可以簡化成一句就好,否則翻成英文會有太多重複字,也顯得冗長喔~~

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  • 1 decade ago

    This is a 100% ok article, no need to be corrected except “幫我訂正這偏英文文章.20點”這個“篇”可以挑剃。

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