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Lv 7
- asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

A four stanza poem that should have been more?

Step back from the abyss,

take a look,

it's free,

behold a monarch in flight.

Watch two dogs at play,

an infant's face as it sleeps,

gaze deeply

into your lover's

eyes.

Enter a room where

one is dying,

not alone,

notice the power

of hands tightly

clasped.

Breathe in the

true beauty

of life.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    From this poem, Ma, I can tell that you are a woman of worldly experience and truly appreciate and love every day.

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  • 1 decade ago

    The last stanza seems to finalize the poem,

    although more could be added before it.

    Really, there's a whole world to contemplate

    with this theme, but you don't want to drag

    it on too long, or some may lose interest.

    Rather, let it stimulate the imagination, as it does.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Sustenance for the soul

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  • Joe K
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Are you asking me to use my senses and get reeeeeally educated!

    The world is full of what needs an observant eye, highly receptive ear, sensitive palm skin, and most importantly pure heart and open mind that soars high above the wanton flesh demands and greed.

    You spoke the truth in a straight forward manner. Thanks!

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  • Regwah
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Beautiful Ma

    I'm breathing

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Beautiful!! I am breathing in the true beauty of life,even though once in a great while,I choke!! When the beauty stabs Me in the back!!

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  • 1 decade ago

    Stepping back and breathing, watching what is around us. A good feeling. We forget sometimes. Good reminder and nice poem.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Beautiful poem. Love the flow. Thank you for sharing!

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  • Daisy
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    There's never enough stanza are there. Poignant pen

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  • 1 decade ago

    I like your poem very much. I think it ended exactly when it should have. No changes are necessary.

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