(急)請各位高手幫我看看翻譯的對不對?

所謂資料庫系統應包括資料庫本身和資料庫的管理系統 。

所謂的資料庫是相關資料的集合。

DBMS是許多程式的集合,它讓使用者有能力去建立與維護資料庫。

So-called DBMS to include Database and Database Management System.

So-called Database is related data to collect.

DBMS is many programs to collect, it to make user can building and keeping Database.

CRM是藉由跟客戶之間戶動的資料做分析,而研擬出一些策略,以提高服務品質或降低成本。

其主要以運用Data Warehouses為基礎 。

CRM is use to analyze data of company between customers, and planning some tactics, to promote quality of service or reduce the cost.

CRM is based on Data Warehouses.

資料倉庫指的通 常是只能讀取的分析工具。

Data Mining 是 Data Warehouse 應用方式中最重要的一種。

Data Mining是指,從大量資料中擷取出有意義的資訊,以便達成有效業務統計的一種資料分析方法。

Data Warehouse to point at analysis tools that only can read.

Data Mining is the most important method in Data Warehouse.

Data Mining is use to get meaningful information from a large number data, and to reach effective business statistics.

為了確保Database的完整性,必須建立DBMS來維護。

CRM必須以顧客導向的服務來突顯本身的差異性,進而提高顧客回流的忠誠度。

If want to complete the Database, must be build a DBMS to keep.

Service of CRM must to take customers reaction as the principal thing and to show difference in itself, and to promote customers backflow.

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    以下是根據你的翻譯所作的文法改正:

    The So-called DBMS to includes a Database and Database Management System.

    The So-called Database is related data to collect.

    DBMS is a collection of many programs to collect; it to make enables user can to building and keeping Database.

    (注意不可以用,要用 ;因為 前后兩個 clause 皆為 independent, 如果用,必須加 connector, 如 and, but, or.....)

    CRM is used to analyze data between of the company and customers, and plansning some tactics, to promote quality of service or reduce the cost.

    CRM is based on Data Warehouses.

    Data Warehouse is an analysis tools that is can read-only

    Data Mining is the most important method in Data Warehouse applications.

    Data Mining is use to get meaningful information from a large number of data, and to reach effective business statistics.

    If want to complete the Database complete, we must be build a DBMS to keep it.

    Service of CRM must to take customers reaction as the principal thing and to show the difference in of itself, and to promote customers backflow.

    個人建議如下:

    A so-called DBMS should consist of a database and a database management system, where "database" refers to a collection of relevant information

    A DBMS is a combination (或collection) of various programs (或applications); it enables users to build and maintain database.

    CRM are schemes constructed based on transaction history with clients for improving service quality and/or reducing cost.

    It primarily involves the use of Data Warehouse.

    Data Warehouse is generally a read-only means of analyses.

    Data mining is the most important of Data Warehouse applications.

    Data mining is a method of data analyses to compile (come up with) constructive business statistics by extracting what is useful from mass data.

    A DBMS is required to ensure and maintain the intactness of the database.

    CRM services must be based on customer feedback to show decisive differences over the competition, which will improve customer loyalty and possibility of returning (continual) business.

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