What do you think of this poem?

Ages wrinkle Earth’s face many times over During all of which, clouts of passion fished for souls to bind No pair fit together like a puzzle piece, but more like matching colors Some simply do not go together while others are complimentary Time has waived by most pairs, but there is one it cannot ignore A... show more Ages wrinkle Earth’s face many times over
During all of which, clouts of passion fished for souls to bind
No pair fit together like a puzzle piece, but more like matching colors
Some simply do not go together while others are complimentary
Time has waived by most pairs, but there is one it cannot ignore

A moon’s glance provides luminosity
They meet over Earth’s brow
In ardor comes the white rose bud
Fate’s glance will not let them be overlooked
Might is pure in each gaze toward each other

In a dash, he is gone. She follows
They will follow one another to the end of time
Neither will tire, for their own passion empowers them
Never ending, never dying, never fading

If it is a strong as its weakest point, then their love will never be broken
They use it to feed the horrors; to turn them to bliss
To this day they lend it to souls
To this day, however, it becomes a challenge

Acceptance of gratitude and peace is uncommon
War rages, conflicts emerge
The couple cries; weather destroys
What has become to make mankind so cruel?

Alas strength's testing passes
As it survives in a new Era
Love mends, love heals, love cares,
Love kills, love destroys, love is moody






incase some people don't understand the white rose part
a white rose symbolizes undying love, purity, and loyalty
Update: I write often and I'm writing a book.
btw... How old do I sound?
Update 2: I just came up with a title! It's called...

Regeneration
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