姿蓉 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我看這樣文法對不對,急~

請您幫我看一下,我的文法有無錯誤,很急,謝謝~請不要用翻譯軟體.

A campus has a direct bearing on the well-being of it is students. If we have a sound school public health system, we will truly enjoy our lives. A good campus is needs everyone to maintain.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hello 小美人,

    本來要寫在意見欄的, 但因說明太多便放在解答了, sorry.

    1. A campus has a direct bearing on the well-being of it is students.

    bearing : 關係,關聯 ( + on)

    well-being : 福利

    學校對學生的福利有直接關係.

    => A school has a direct bearing on the well-being of its students.

    2. If we have a sound school public health system, we will truly enjoy our lives.

    sound : 健康的;健全的(形容詞)

    public health system : 公共衛生體系

    如果學校能有健全的公共衛生體系, 我們就可以真正的享受我們的學校生活

    => If a school has a sound public health system, we'll be able to truly enjoy our school life.

    3. A good campus is needs everyone to maintain.

    優良的校園品質要靠每一個人來(共同)維護

    => A good campus quality needs everyone to maintain.

    A campus quality is necessary to be maintained by everyone.

    2009-04-18 02:54:51 補充:

    第一句的 its 可改為 the ....

    Source(s): me and hope to help you a bit
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  • 1 decade ago

    1. have direct being on--> 不需加a

    2. the well-being of "its" students-->而非 it is

    3. a sound school public health system-->你想說的是學校能提供健全的健康制度?還是如果學校的體制是健康的呢? 但又跟後面的we will truly enjoy our lives. A good campus is needs everyone to maintain. 沒有正相關啊!?

    如果是說學校的體制健全,我們便可以享受我們的學校生活,可寫作:

    If the system of the school is sound and healthy, we may be able to enjoy our school life.

    4. A good campus is needs everyone to maintain.--> A good campus needs everyone to maintain.

    以上,供您參考!

    Source(s): myself
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