Thank you for the help with my character, he has been bugging me! I am considering Hadrian - one of your suggestions - and would love to help you too! I read your intro and thought it was brilliant very professional, i actually think we have a very similar writing style, i loved the way that your protagonist doesnt seem like a 'helpless' main role, damsel in distressish type and i thought that the narrative voice was really clear cut, humorous and almost quite sassy, i loved some of your phrasings like 'and after hours of hunching over a desk. my back wasnt faring well either." I like that style, it could almost be described as abrupt. I like it and encourage you to press on, maybe make a whole new vampire image because for some reason the world is kind of vmapire obsessed at the moment(?!) lol. Or maybe revert to the very original type of vampire, garlic, stakes, crosses! I like how your protagonist isnt totally terrified or soppy, i love a main character who has a bit of feist and isnt all 'ohhh savvveeee meee!!!' all the time . . gets old. Good like and if it gets published i want a percentage of the profits lol, im joking!
me! some twilight refrencing (subtle!)