Is this Haiku in correct Swedish?

I'm writing (or trying to) write a haiku in Swedish, and this is where I am so far, however, I'd like to ask someone who knows what they're talking about if they could look it over and perhaps tell me where the mistakes are and how to correct them, if at all possible? Thanks in advance! Här ett... show more I'm writing (or trying to) write a haiku in Swedish, and this is where I am so far, however, I'd like to ask someone who knows what they're talking about if they could look it over and perhaps tell me where the mistakes are and how to correct them, if at all possible?

Thanks in advance!

Här ett viska löv
Jag gripa det att kyssa
Ett sådan fint sak
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