Can someone please help, I'm having a bit of trouble in my story?
*Jeremy has magic but I'm trying to make limitations but it's magic, how can I?
* I want to name a certain palce something. The place is like hell, so far I came up with Tenjoku which means hell in japanese, anything else?
*Is there a certain limit to how many characters you can have before the story becomes confusing?
*They go challenge a demon in hell to cure them of the curse but how can I explain how they found out they had the curse *Alezander already knows, Tyler and Jeremy don't* so far I came up with that they visit a graveyard and they find Alezander's grave when it really is Alezander's phantom's grave *that's part of the curse* I think that's kinda stupid so what are other suggestions?
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