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? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急~~10點~~幫我看有沒有文法的錯誤~~

Minos invaded to the country and captured Athenians.

Take7 Character: Aegeus、Minos

Aegeus:Don’t kill me.

Minos:I won’t kill you unless every nine years the Athenians send me a tribute of seven youths and seven maidens

Aegeus:But……it’s too over.

Minos:恩?

Androgeus:Yeah, yeah. I promise.

這是我們要演出的劇本~~

1. 有無文法錯誤

2.或有更好的說法

3.時態的正確與否

4.中文翻英文

5.有些old language幫我改成modern language

不要翻譯網站~~

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  • Sigma
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    1 decade ago
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    Minos invaded the country and captured Athenians.

    Take7 Character: Aegeus、Minos

    Aegeus:Don’t kill me.

    Minos:I won’t kill you unless every nine years the Athenians send me a tribute of seven youths and seven maidens

    Aegeus:But……it’s too over.

    Minos:Mmm?

    Androgeus:Yeah, yeah. I promise.

    Source(s): myself
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