請問這兩個英文句子有沒有錯誤

Question

不好意思請問一下

(1)

Some people may say that it is the sweetest part of love; however, I have to say, it is the most harmful thing to our heart

however前面如果改成"," 可以嗎？？

(2)Love brings us a lot of emotions. Sometimes is brings us happiness, and sometimes upset, of which constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in our daily life.

這樣寫有沒有地方有錯呀？！

感恩捏～～

Update:

那請問該怎麼修改呢??　尤其是第二句　我想知道該怎麼改

謝啦

Answer 1

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Love brings us a lot of emotions. 文法上並無錯誤

但這句Some people may say that it is the sweetest part of love若改成上一句

那就意義不相同了

下面的句子Sometimes is brings us happiness, and sometimes upset, of which constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in our daily life.

文法上需修正

Source(s): 教學經驗

Answer 2

請問: 出於何處?

第一題: 我也覺得O

第二題: 台灣人寫的O (只好這樣)中文邏輯抒寫

外國人寫的嘛......不太可能 X

(2)Love brings /us/ a lot of emotions. Sometimes is brings /us/ happiness, and sometimes upset, of which constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in /our/ daily life.

@通常會用one 或 you (讀讀看= one更客觀/ you更親近)

Love brings ONE a lot of emotions.

Sometimes is brings ONE happiness, and sometimes upset, of which

constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in ONE'S daily life.

*其他字都OK*

Love brings YOU a lot of emotions.

Sometimes is brings YOU happiness, and sometimes upset, of which

constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in YOUR daily life.

2009-04-05 16:58:06 補充：

喔喔!我上當了(忽略了主題是love) 更正處用大寫:

Love brings ONE a lot of emotions. *ONE/ YOU + ONE'S/ YOUR可互換 *

Sometimes IT brings ONE happiness, and sometimes upset, of which

constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in ONE'S daily life.

( of which就要問高手= 腦筋打結了 )

Answer 3

(1) Some people may say that it is the sweetest part of love; however, I have to say, it is the most harmful thing to our heart.

however前面如果改成"," 可以嗎？

不可以，一定要用分號。表示對等。

(2) Love brings us a lot of emotions. Sometimes is brings us happiness, and sometimes upset, of which constantly make a positive-negative emotional circulation in our daily life.

原句有錯誤，試修正如下：

Love brings us a lot of emotions. Sometimes it brings us happiness, but sometimes upset. This makes our daily life an emotional cycle: moving from positive to negative and back to positive again.

2009-04-02 17:12:00 補充：

back to positive again請改為returning to positive again