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Issue: Global warming.

Introduction:

Today I am going to talk about my issue is Global warming. Why we need to stop global warming. How can we stop global warming? There are three reasons to explain the topic.

Reasons:

The reason one is Global warming will make the species are in danger of extinction. According to the Global mean surface temperature anomaly, and that natural phenomena such as solar variation and volcanoes probably had a small warming. It will cause levels to rise and species extinctions. So we need to refuse the product of animals.

The reason two is there are many poisonous gas are made by human will cause Global warming. For example when you ride a motorcycle and drive a car. It will discharge the waste gas. Besides if you waste the electricity. It will discharge a large of CO2. I think we must to do well on the Energy Saving and Global Reduction. Then protect the environment.

The reason three is we need to use recycle dinnerware instead of plastic dinnerware. The plastic products can not be recycled and that they are burned by human will discharge poisonous gas. We must do our best to use the recycle products.

Conclusion:

We need to stop global warming. It is important for us. Recyclable low pollution and energy saving can stop global warming. Furthermore it can give us a nice life.

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    Issue: Global warming.

    Introduction:

    Today what /(which) I am going to talk about my issue is "Global warming" ? Why we need to stop global warming ? How can we stop global warming? There are three reasons to explain the topic.

    Reasons:

    The reason one is "Global warming" will make the species be in danger of extinction. According to the Global-warming means that the surface temperatures become anomaly/=abnormal , and that natural phenomena such as solar variation and volcanoes probably had a small warming. It will cause sea-levels to rise and the species extinctions. So we need to refuse the product of animals.

    The reason two is there are many poisonous gas ( to be) made by human will cause "Global warming". For example whenever you ride a motorcycle and drive a car , it will discharge the waste gas. Besides if you waste the electricity , it will discharge a large amount of CO2. I think we must do the best on the Energy- Saving and Global- Reduction. Then protect our environment.

    The reason three is we need to use recycling dinnerware instead of plastic dinnerware. The plastic products can not be recycled and because that whenever/=every time/ they are burned by human will discharge poisonous gas. We should do our best to use the recycleing products.

    Conclusion:

    We have the great duty to stop the global processively持續地 warming. It is important for us to protect our environment. .Recyclable low pollution and energy saving can stop global warming. Furthermore , it can give us (much) nicer living life.

    2009-04-04 23:24:06 補充:

    命令性使役動詞有has /have / make/ order/ want /command/ ...等等

    命令性使役動詞has /have / make/ order/ want /command/ ...+ O+ V原型.的句型

    命令性使役動詞+ O+ V原型.的句型

      I want you go V原型).我要你自己走開

      I order him stand( V原型).我要求他站立

    2009-04-04 23:41:01 補充:

    1.命令性使役動詞+ O+ V原型.的句型

    而 be 動詞 的原形=>be

    所以=>....make the species *be* in danger of extinction.

    2009-04-04 23:51:45 補充:

    2.使役動詞之命令*被動*句型

    has /have / make/ order/ want /command/ ... O +V.pp過去分詞.的句型

      

    I want you beaten(V.pp)..我要你"被"打

    =I want you (to be ) beaten. €//(to be ) .可以省略

       I want the car repaired(V.pp)..我要這車"被"修理

    =I want the car (to be ) repaired

    2009-04-04 23:53:25 補充:

    2........there are many poisonous gas ( to be) made by human will cause .......

    =過去分詞. 結構的句型

    €//(to be )可以省略

    made =過去分詞(V.pp)

    cause= 主要動詞

    2009-04-05 00:05:32 補充:

    3.recycle=(使再循環;再利用)=V(動詞)

    因為recycle=只有V.(動詞)

    要改為recycle +ing= 現在分詞(V.ing)= recycling 當作 --形容詞 或名詞

    =回收;(資源,垃圾)回收利用

    recycling plant(s) =資源回收廠/場

    recycling work/job =資源回收工作

    2009-04-05 00:19:46 補充:

    4......it can give us (much) * nicer* living life .

    nicer=(nice的比較級)

    因為本句有*比較*之含意...= <'環保前' 和 '環保後'..之比較>

    nicer=better= more comfortable.. ... +( than ......)

    (much) =只是副詞性質的修飾語

    2009-04-05 00:33:15 補充:

    5.~~what /(which) I am going to talk about my issue is ...

    I do not know *what* you said.

    請參考yahoo字典 ~>*what*的用法 :

    ~(4).用作關係代名詞)凡是...的事物..

    Say what you have to say.你要說什麼就說什麼.(yahoo字典例句)

    2009-04-20 05:48:11 補充:

    抱歉......句首要修改-->

    Today what /(which) I am going to talk about my issue is "Global warming" *? *

    本句尾之問號? 要修改回句號 * . *

    因為本句是敘述句.

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