陳昇遠 asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急! 請幫忙修改句子 part 2 20m

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孫仔越走越遠 , 父親立即上前抱起兒子 , 但已經走了太遠 , 忘了回去的路 。 他父子倆在秘道內走呀 ~ 走 , 突然孫仔跳下 。。。 " 我見到伯伯 , 伯伯啊 ! "

父親追上前 , 見到一個身穿教士服裝 , 面上帶著微笑的外籍老人 , 但他不是站著 , 好像是浮在地面上的擺 , 父親再追上前抱起兒子 , 老人已經不見了 ? 但在他身旁發現了一副白骨 ! 父親怕了 , 拼命地走 , 結果不知怎的 , 在大三巴腳一梯間轉了出來 。 之後他們一 家搬走了 , 警方再到調查 --- 搬走白骨 , 同父親講 , 白骨可能係以前躲入防空洞的神父 , 因為年紀太老了 , 又有食物食水 , 結果在防空洞內死了 ! 但係後來有人 ( 包括我 ) , 專程去找防空洞也找不到 ... 個故仔我都係聽返黎的 , 信不信由你 。

Child run forward, his father picked up him immediately, but they has gone too far and forgot how to go back.

They have gone in the channel, suddenly, the kid jumped in a hole and said he saw the man.

Father Caught up his kid, and he saw a priest who was a old foreigner dressed in costumes.

But he was not standing, as if he was floating in the air.

Father picked up his kid, the old priest was disappeared.

Only a pair of bones of the dead on the floor! Father was very afraid, he tried to go, and finally went out in the staircase.

After the family moved out, the police investigated and removed the bones of the dead, the bones of the dead may be a priest,

Because of his advanced age, and there was no food and water, he died at the air-raid shelter!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Grandson has gone very far. His father quickly went forward and held him tight. Because they'd gone too far, they couldn't find the way back. The only choice was keep forward. Grandson suddenly jumped down and said, "I saw him, uncle!" Father run forward and saw an old man. He's wearing priest clothing and was smiling. He wasn't stand on the ground, but was floating on the ground. Father quickly picked his son up again. At that time, the old man disappeared. Father found there's a pile of bones besides him. He's really frightened and started to run. Finally they escaped. After this happened, they moved. The police started the second investigation in that house and remove all the bones. He told the father that old man probably was a priest, and because of his age and no food or water, he died in the shelter. Few years later, many people (including me) tried to find this place, but no one could ever find this shelter again... I heard this story from somewhere, but it is your choice to believe it or not!

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