泡麵 asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

請英文好的大大幫我檢查英文自傳

這是我的申請大學英文自傳其中一段

請英文好的大大幫我檢查文法或拼字用詞不當的地方

我的文法 時態不是很好

文意不當建議換掉的句子 請用力糾正吧

意思相通都可以

很感激喔

communicatuon experience

I always seize every chance to talk with foreigners, such as on bus, in McDonald's, at train station, in sightseeing temple and on Taipei streets, etc. Sometimes I also take the chance to chat with my mother's customers when I follow them to go out for fun. Maybe, I am not so perfect in grammar or pronunciation but I still try hard to speak English. To me, each conversation is a good experience. I learned new things from mistakes. The better is, I found that whenever I show the kindness to foreigners, they always return the same to me.

交談經驗

我總是把握每一次機會和外國人交談,在公車,麥當勞,火車站,古蹟寺廟<外國人會觀光的那種>,還有台北街頭. 或許我的文法和發音部是很好,但是我仍然試著去說英文. 對我而言每一次對話都是好的經驗. 我從錯誤裡學習. 更好的是, 我發現每一次我對外國人表現出友善他們也會回報我一樣的友善.

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  • Sigma
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    1 decade ago
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    這是我的申請大學英文自傳其中一段

    請英文好的大大幫我檢查文法或拼字用詞不當的地方

    我的文法 時態不是很好

    文意不當建議換掉的句子 請用力糾正吧

    意思相通都可以

    很感激喔

    Communicatuon experience in English

    I always seize every chance to chat with foreigners, such as on bus, in McDonald's, at train station, in temples as sightseeing spots and on Taipei streets. Sometimes I also take the chance to chat with my mother's customers when I go outing with them. Maybe, I am not so perfect in grammar or pronunciation. Still, I try hard to speak in English. To me, each conversation is a good experience. I learned new things from mistakes. What is even better is that I found whenever I am friendly to foreigners, they always return the same to me.

    Source(s): myself
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