Poetry Help needed ASAP?

Im writing a poem and im stuck on one stanza. Im writing a Interlocking Rubiyat; Iambic Pentameter. Rhyme scheme is aaba bbcb ccdc dded <-- on this one currently eefe ffaf So here's the stanza:: Why do you not get the message I convey? I felt you existence yesterday, [line i need help... show more Im writing a poem and im stuck on one stanza.
Im writing a Interlocking Rubiyat; Iambic Pentameter.

Rhyme scheme is
aaba
bbcb
ccdc
dded <-- on this one currently
eefe
ffaf

So here's the stanza::

Why do you not get the message I convey?
I felt you existence yesterday,
[line i need help with]
Although i still look around in disarray. <- Not sure if im going to put that there.
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