Renny L asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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4. the benefits of the students get from working with the laptops far outweigh the negatives of the small number of students who play games instead of learning. It can reduce the quality of learning in classroom because teachers also have to raise their attention to focus on the students who are using laptops to school for ensure they are not playing video game. Then, teacher won’t have enough time to teach other students. In fact, students who are using laptops on classroom may lose something very important on lecture while they are playing video game on their laptops.

5.Finally, laptops is very convenient in some places, however, it is not a right timing for students bring into classroom. The most reason is that not every student using laptops in the classrooms, so it may interrupt other students by their tapping keys. If the students really want to bring laptop to school, then the students have to make sure that they won’t let the entertainment on laptops to influence their focus on class.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    4. The advantages student gets from using laptops for learning purposes far outweigh those using them to play games. It can deteriorate the quality of learning and teaching in classroom as teachers are always distracted to ensure those laptop users are not playing video games, this often occupy regular teaching hour. In fact, students who use laptops for improper purposes may miss something very important on lecture in classroom.

    5. Though laptop brings convenience in many aspects, it still should be leave outside the classroom. The main reason is that the tapping noise will interrupt others who don't have laptop. If the students insist on bringing laptop to school, then they must make sure they can resist the temptation of the entertainments from the laptop while attending class.

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  • 1 decade ago

    The benefits students get from working with the laptops far outweigh the advantages a small number of students get from playing games instead of learning.In the classroom it reduces the quality of learning because teachers have to raise their attention of the students using laptops to ensure they against playing video game. Then, teacher don't have enough time to teach the other students. In fact, students who use laptops may lose something important on lecture while they are playing video game.

    Finally, laptops are very convenient in some places, however, it is not a right time for students to bring to school. The main reason is that not every student uses a laptop in class, so it may interrupt other students with tapping keys. If some students really want to use laptops in class, then the students have to make sure that their entertainment in laptops will not influence others during class.

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