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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

希望英文領域的專家幫我指導句子

希望英文高手可以教導及指正英文句子.(共三段)

Making friends are interesting and exciting very much on line. Many people’s life are too busy , that there are few chance to make friends except work and school, however it is easy to meet the people congenial on line.

I had met Eddie who an American university student for three years ago, both of us liked discuss to talk the movie critique at that time. One day, I have written a movie critique about American football“Any Given Sunday” commentary. He said” What’s the reason that I dislike that film, it could be because I did not understand the American football”. Then he tells me many kind of ball’s rule. Therefore, I have understood with a deep into that movie. After that I and Eddie are discuss the movie area to talk it through email, even we talk about studies and the families each other.

It is interesting to make friends that our friendship had proven, moreover it can meet that the person of various on line and help the way when you deliberate and lets your heart be broad-minded.

Update:

由於自己的英文文法不好,所以,才會希望英文高手可以教導及指正"英文"句子(共三段),並不需要中文翻譯,謝謝.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    making friends是一件事,動詞應該是 is

    on line應該是一個字不用分開,或者你可以說on the Internet

    , that there are few chance to make friends except work and school

    基本上that前面是不能有逗點,用so應該會比較好

    Then he tells me

    tells應該是told 因為是過去發生的事

    I and Eddie

    習慣先寫別人在寫自己,所以會變成Eddie and I

    After that I and Eddie are discuss the movie area to talk it through email 已經有discuss那to talk it 就不用了

    不知道還有沒有我沒看到的

    有問題再告訴我

    如果我有改錯也請跟我說一下^^"

    希望對你有幫助=]

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  • 1 decade ago

    我會一些些英文 我盡力幫你翻譯喔!!

    在網路上交朋友是有趣且刺激的。許多人的生活都太繁忙了,

    很少有機會在學校或工作的場所交朋友,但是,他們可以簡單

    方便的在網路上交朋友。在三年前,我教過一個叫Eddie,他是

    一個在美國的大學生,在當時,我們都很喜歡一起談論有關於

    最新的電影。有一天,我寫了一篇有關於美式足球電影“Any

    Given Sunday”的電影評論。他說「為甚麼我會不喜歡這部電

    影是因為我根本不懂得美式足球!!」。然後,他跟我說的許多

    球類運動的規則。之後,我深深的瞭解了那部電影。我跟Eddie

    用電子郵件再度討論那部電影,我們甚至用它來聊有關於學業

    方面與家庭方面的事情呢!!

    當我們的友情更加深厚,交友越來越有趣了。當我要考慮重大

    的事情時,我甚至會跟少數的朋友見面來讓我的心胸更加的寬

    闊。

    Source(s): 我自己翻的
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