qzpm asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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這是for小朋友母親節敘述自己媽媽的

我的媽媽頭髮是短短的,眼睛嘴巴都小小的,臉大大的很像布丁,常常笑咪咪‧我覺得媽媽笑起來時嘴巴像香蕉一樣彎彎的,很漂亮‧我最喜歡媽媽的臉,因為媽媽的臉很可愛‧媽媽平常都會幫我檢查功課,帶我出去玩‧媽媽都會買我最愛的熱狗給我吃,我也會陪媽媽在公園裡散步‧我希望能永遠陪媽媽快樂地散步‧

My mom has short hair with small eyes and month. Her face looks like a pudding, always with smiles. When she smiles, it looks like a curved banana that I feel it's very beautiful. I like her face most because it’s very cute. My mom usually checks my homework and takes me out to play. She always buys my favorite food, hot dog, for me. I like to take a walk with her in the park. I hope that I can accompany her to take a walk happily forever.

我的媽媽有著長長捲捲的頭髮和小小的眼睛,她的臉看起來像檸檬,因為上面有一點點的小雀斑‧而我最喜歡媽媽的手,因為媽媽的手很大能緊緊的抱住我,還會煮好吃的東西‧我喜歡和媽媽一起去買東西,因為媽媽都會買牛奶、餅乾給我‧我希望能永遠的和媽媽在一起,因為我愛媽媽‧在這個特別的節日裡,我想跟您說: “謝謝您,媽媽。祝您母親節快樂,還有我愛妳。”

My mom has long curly hair and small eyes. Her face looks like a lemon because it has little freckles on it. I like my mom’s hand most because they are big enough to hold me tightly and it can make delicious food. I like to go shopping with my mom because she always buys milk and cookies for me. I hope that I can stay with my mom because I love my mom . On this special day, I want to say: “thank you, Mom. Happy Mother’s Day and I love you.

我的媽媽頭髮長長的,眼睛有擦睫毛膏所以閃閃亮亮的,但是嘴巴都沒有擦口紅‧皮膚白白的,臉也會擦腮紅‧我覺得媽媽擦眼影及穿裙子時最漂亮的‧另外,我最喜歡媽媽的手,因為摸起來軟軟的很舒服,媽媽很會煮菜,尤其是酸辣湯,一點都不辣喔!媽媽平常都要工作很辛苦,所以我都會幫忙媽媽‧我最希望的是媽媽永遠留在我身邊,因為我最愛的就是媽媽‧

My mom has long straight hair. Her eyes are shining because she mascaras her eyes, but her mouse is without lipstick. Her skin is white and with blush on her face. I feel that my mom is the most beautiful when she wears a skirt and wipes the eye’s shadow. Beside, I like my mom’s hand most because they are so soft. My mom is good at cook especially Sour and Hot Soup and it’s not spicy at all. My mom works very tired and I give her a hand usually. I hope that I can stay with my mom because I love my mom most.

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    My mom has short hair with small eyes and mouth. Her face looks like a pudding, always with a smile on it. When she smiles, it looks like a curved banana. I feel that it is very beautiful. I like her face most because it is very cute. My mom usually checks my homework and takes me out to play. She always buys my favorite food, which is hot dog, for me. I like to take a walk with her in the park. I hope that I can accompany her to take a walk happily forever.

    My mom has curly long hair and small eyes. Her face looks like a lemon because it has little freckles on it. I like her hands the most because they are big enough to hold me tightly and it can make delicious food. I like to go shopping with my mom because she always buys milk and cookies for me. I hope that I can stay with my mom forever because I love her a lot. On this special day, I want to tell her: Thank you, Mom. Happy Mother's Day, I love you.

    My mom has long straight hair. Her eyes are shining because she mascaras her eyes, but she does not put lipstick on her mouth. Her skin is white and with blush on her face. I feel that my mom is the most beautiful when she wears a skirt and has eye shadow on. I like her hands the most because they are very soft. My mom is a good cook, especially when it comes to Sour and Spicy Soup. It is not spicy at all. My mom works very hard. When she is tired, I usually give her a hand. I hope that I can stay with my mom forever because I love my mom very much.

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