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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請大家幫我看一下我的文法

我的文法很爛

可是星期三要交一篇小文章

所以想要請大家幫我看一下文法上的錯誤

以防老師看到昏頭

謝謝大家

Tom thinks the issues of gender, wastefulness, freedom and so on. It

is quite unlike between concept in the city and in the countryside.

Tom thinks the wasteful situation in the city is very serious. Due to the city people can spend ten dollars for a meal to substitute for keeping

the money to do the other things. Also they built a skating rink and

demolished it very soon, and the same location is built a highway.

Therefore, Tom deeply realizes the spend habit in the city so that both of Tom and his wife feel that they should go back to the village.

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    Tom thinks about the issues of gender, wastefulness, freedom and so on.(需加介係詞)

    It

    is quite unlike between concept in the city and in the countryside.(不好意思 這句我實在看不懂 你確切要表達的中文意思為何 所以 不確定該怎麼改比較好)

    Tom thinks that the situation of wasteness in the city is very serious.(改成名詞似乎比較保險,用wasteful situation好像有點怪)

    For example, people in the city don't save money to do other things,

    but spend ten dollars just for a meal instead.

    ( 1.Due to 後面應該要+ n,若要加句子,應該也要改成名詞子句才合文法,可是這樣句子可能會拉太長,所以,我看你的句意,改成用for example可能會比較順,還有片語instead)

    Also they built a skating rink and demolished it very soon.

    And then they built a highway in the same location.

    Therefore, Tom deeply realizes the wasteful habits in the city so that both Tom and his wife feel that they should go back to the village.

    以上,你參考一下吧 不敢說文法一定完全正確了

    但至少我想應該看的懂

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