女兒要做英文小書,請各位幫忙看看英文故事寫的正確嗎?

A cat and a dog.

Once a day, a dog is go the park.

A dog named Kevin.

A cat’s name is Aileen.

She walks to the park, too.

At part, Aileen sees her best friend Kevin.

Both of then are happy.

They talks with each other all the time, and plays together.

While eating lunch, they are interrupted by the rabbit’s remarks.

The rabbit says: “How could cat and dog be a good friend!”

They are angered by this, and replied to the rabbit.

Why cat and dog couldn’t be good friend!”

The rabbit says: “cat and dog are lifelong enemies.”

Kevin and Aileen don’t think so, and they get along with each other well.

Seeing this, the rabbit realizes he is wrong.

Ever since, the rabbit join them on friend.

Finally, they because good friend.

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    1 decade ago
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    問題: 女兒要做英文小書,請各位幫忙看看英文故事寫的正確嗎?

    A cat and a dog.

    Once a day, a dog is go the park.

    A dog named Kevin.

    A cat’s name is Aileen.

    She walks to the park, too.

    At part, Aileen sees her best friend Kevin.

    Both of then are happy.

    They talks with each other all the time, and plays together.

    While eating lunch, they are interrupted by the rabbit’s remarks.

    The rabbit says: “How could cat and dog be a good friend!”

    They are angered by this, and replied to the rabbit.

    Why cat and dog couldn’t be good friend!”

    The rabbit says: “cat and dog are lifelong enemies.”

    Kevin and Aileen don’t think so, and they get along with each other well.

    Seeing this, the rabbit realizes he is wrong.

    Ever since, the rabbit join them on friend.

    Finally, they because good friend.

    你的解答:

    差不多都對~

    不保證是全部喔~

    第5句 有點怪 你看看ㄅ

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