Mark asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

Cover letter急急急

各位大哥大姐

唔該幫幫手睇下我份 cover letter有冇問題

Dear Sir/Madam,

Date: 28-2-2009

Application for the position of (post)

Applicant (my name)

I write to apply for the above position as advertised in the your company web site dated 27/2/2009

As a graduate from HKCWC Fung Yin King Memorial Secondary School. At present, I am studying an accounting at the Hong Kong College of Technology to further upgrade my knowledge in the field and plan to take other language course to enhance my language skills. I trust that my credentials matched with your job requirements.

Do feel free to call on me for further details at your convenience.

Regards!

Yours truly,

(My name)

2 Answers

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  • Ling
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    Layout of proper letter should be:

    Your name in the centre with address and contact telepone in the centre of very top

    Date:

    TO:

    The Personnel Manager

    Company Name (if any)

    Subject: application for ____________(the post)

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I write to apply for the above position advertised in the your company website dated 27/2/2009

    I am a graduate from HKCWC Fung Yin King Memorial Secondary School in 200x. I am now studying accounting at the Hong Kong College of Technology to upgrade my knowledge in the field and plan to take other language course to enhance my language skills.

    I trust that I have the requirement for the said post & will be pleased to come for an interview granted to me at your convenience. I can be reached by my mobile phone xxxxxxx or email address xxxxx.

    Thanks for your kind attention and look forward to hearing from you shortly.

    Your sincerely,

    Name of applicant

  • 1 decade ago

    The answer of 001 is OK. But the subject of the letter should be put after "Dear Sir"

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    Application for the post of XXXX

    I write to...

    Besides, I suggest you include in your letter why you want to apply for the job. I guess you are applying for an accounting-related job. You may write something like, "I am a very meticulous person and am good at handling figures. I want to develop my career in the accounting profession...."

    You should also attach a resume with your application letter.

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