Shadow asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

麻煩請英文高手幫我看一下內容是否可行,感謝!!!

請各位幫我看一下內容,順便糾正一下,感謝囉!!!

因為星期四(2/26)晚上就要用了,所以.........,謝謝囉!!!

According to our traditional values, parents always hope their boy will become a dragon, and hope their girl will become a phoenix. It means that they hope their children can be better than others in their phase of learning and future life. But nowadays, as everyone knows, parents spoil their children more and they always worry about their children’s body and mind will be hurt after they are punished for any mistakes during their phase of learning. It causes the children wouldn’t be as out of hand (無法控制) as they are and couldn’t get along with others.

In Taiwan, physical punishment in the education system was banned in January 2007, Taiwan became to the 109th country without physical punishment in the education system of the world. That stops teachers effectively from punishing students physically, but that causes the quality of education (教學品質) decreasingly. The behavior departure of the teenager are getting worse (青少年行為偏差日漸嚴重), and the average age of criminals is lowing. The teenager occur to the news more often, and 手段兇殘令人髮指,

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  • RY
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    1 decade ago
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    According to our traditional values of our lives, the parents are always to hope their boys and girls can be well up brought. It means that they hope their children will be more excellent than the others in their periods of schooling and their future outlooks. But in nowadays, as everyone knows on the opposite side, the parents always spoil their children much and they worry about their children will be hurt both mentally and physically in school for being punished by the teachers after they made mistakes. The parents they do think of that it probably might causes their children act reversely and out of their control or not be able to get along with the others.

    In Taiwan , physical punishment in the education system was being banned in January 2007, Taiwan became the 109th country to carry its education (system) without any physical punishment in the world. That stops teachers effectively punishing their students physically, but it also causes the quality of the education decreased. The deviation of their behavior of the teenager students are getting worse, and the average age of committing a crime is lowering. The teenagers break laws quite often, and it happened thrillingly to the whole society.

  • 1 decade ago

    their boy will become a dragon, and hope their girl will become a phoenix.

    你要說成龍成鳳,我不是英文高手但好像從沒看過人家這麼說!你還不如說 will become the shining star....之類的

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