lulu asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我改這幾句英文

1.John should have a good sleep,because he need to have more energy to deal with his problem.

2.Company should give us more salary,because we are so poor.

3.We should sleep early,because it can make me health.

4.I should study work hard,because knowledge is very important in world.

5.He should turn off the tv,because he need to go to bed.

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    1.John should have a good sleep,because he need to have more energy to deal with his problem.

    John should REST more because he needS to have more.....................

    he <--- singular needs to <---

    John should rest more<-------------It is better.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    2.Company should give us more salary,because we are so poor.

    OUR company should increase our salary because we are so poor now.

    or

    Our company should increase our salary because we need money so badly now.

    3.We should sleep early,because it can make me health.

    We should sleep early because sleeping is good for our health.

    ( no comma) because<---------

    Sleeping <---------- not " it"

    make me health( noun)<----------- grammatical mistake!

    4.I should study work hard,because knowledge is very important in world.

    I should study ( AND WORK) harder because ( I think) knowledge is very important (in THE world).

    in the world <---------------

    study HARDER ( comparative)

    You don't really need to put " in the world" into the sentence.

    Of course you mean " in the world".

    5.He should turn off the tv,because he need to go to bed.

    He should turn off the TV because he needS to go to bed (now).

    TV<-------Capital letters

    he <--------- singular needS to .................

    2009-02-22 16:08:45 補充:

    I should study ( NOT " WORK" HERE) harder because ( I think) knowledge is very important (in THE world).

    2009-02-23 18:25:34 補充:

    For" OUR company should increase our salary because we are so poor now.",

    I suggest you rewrite it as follows--

    My boss should increase our salary because he knows we need money so badly.

    We are poor<------- it doesn't mean our company should increase............

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  • 1 decade ago

    1.John should have a good sleep because he needs to have more ener

    gy to solve his problem.

    2.Company should give us more salary because we are so poor.

    3.We should sleep early because it can make us healthier.

    4.I should study hard because knowledge is a important thing in the

    world.

    5.He should turn off the TV because he needs to go to bed.

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  • 1 decade ago

    1.因為John 要多一些能量去解決問題,所以他會有好的睡眠。

    (Because John needs to solve his problem, he needs to sleep well.)

    John 應該要有一個好的睡眠,這樣他便會有能量去解決問題。

    (John should have a good sleep so that he has energy to solve his problem.)

    2.Company should give us more salary,because we are so poor.

    這句的意思係:因為我們POOR,公司要俾多D人工給我們。

    <-- 因果關係有D怪。

    3.We should sleep early,so that we have a healthy life.

    我們應該要早D睡,這樣我們便有健康。

    OR Sleeping early can make us more healthy.

    Because we need a healthy life, we should sleep early.

    4. I should study hard,because knowledge is very important in the world. 這句子有二個動詞(study / work)

    5.He should turn off the TV,because he needs to go to bed.

    要留意HE係第三生單數,動詞後面要加"s"。

    Because =因為 (有因先有果)

    So that =以至於 (由於這個A,便有B)

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