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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請各位大大們幫我修改我的英文自我介紹 (急) 20點

我是參加扶輪社的交換學生

三月的時候需要發表自己我英文自我介紹

大概三分鐘的時間 有點長

我大致上自己先翻了

可是我覺得我翻得還是有錯誤

所以請各位好心的網友們幫我修改看看哪裡有誤

(如有覺得不必要字可以省略的也可以)

謝謝你們感激不盡

以下是我的自我介紹

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哈囉,大家好:

Hello, everyone:

這是我第一次用英文在大家面前自我介紹,我非常緊張,而且我很容易臉紅,所以請大家別介意,謝謝。

This is I first time to introduce myself by English in front of everyone. I am very nervous, and I blush easily. Please everyone don’t take offense, thanks.

我是XXX扶輪社的交換學生。

I am exchange student from Rotary Club of XXX.

我的名字叫XXX,你們可以叫我XXX。

My name is XXX. You can call me XXX.

這名子是一位外國爺爺幫我取的,我覺得非常好聽,而且我也非常喜歡。

This name is named by a foreign grandfather. I feel this name sounding nice, and I like it so much.

我今年十七歲,出生於XXX,現在家住XXX。

I am seventeen years old. I was born in XXX. Now, I live in XXX.

我目前是高中生,就讀XXX。

I am a senior high school student. Studying in XXX.

我們家有五個成員,包刮我的父母、哥哥、妹妹還有我。

There are five people in my family, inclouding my parents, my elder brother, my younger sister and I.

我爸媽因為工作關係經常出國,使得我比較獨立自主,比較不會讓我父母擔心;

My parents often go abroad because of their job. Therefore, I become more independent and don’t be worried now.

我哥哥目前在台北讀大學二年級;而我妹妹現在是國中生。

My elder brother is a sophomore studying in university in Taipei. My younger sister is a junior high school student

我們家庭關係融洽,在寒暑假經常一起到處遊玩。

Our sentiments is harmonious. We often go out together when winter vacation or summer vacation.

我愛我的家,我父母總是支持我的想法及意見,他們不會強迫我做我不想做的事。

I love my family. My parents back me up all the time. They never force me to do what I don’t want to do.

我的個性樂觀又活潑開朗,雖然在外表上看不出來,我跟朋友們也都相處得不錯。

My personality is optimistic though it can’t be talled easily. I get along with my friends very well.

我的興趣非常多,像是畫圖、彈吉他。

I have many interests just like drawing the pictures and play the guitar.

但我的吉他彈得不是很好,因為沒有學很久。

I play the guitar is not very well because I learn it didn’t have a long time.

Update:

在學校我曾經參加過吉他社,目前是參加排球社。因為排球也是我的興趣之一,放學的時候我都會跟高中同學打排球。

I joined the guitar club before. Now, I join the volleyball club. Because the volleyball is also my interest. My classmates and I play volleyball afterschool.

Update 2:

我平時做的休閒活動也不少,像是看書、看電影、聽音樂、逛街旅行等。

I will see the books, see the movies, listening to the music, go window shopping or traveling around on my free time.

我平常無聊時也會玩電腦、看電視來打發時間。

When I am bored, I will play computer or watch TV to kill time.

我喜歡國外的事物。

I love foreign things so much.

Update 3:

我記得在我年紀還小的時候,我就把環遊世界當成是我的夢想,到現在都還沒變。

I remember I have dreamed of traveling around the world since I was a kid. This dream never change in my mind.

我一直希望我哪天能真的住在國外生活看看,體驗不同的校園生活及文化。

I hope that I can live in other countries to experience different school life and culture some day.

Update 4:

現在我終於有這個機會能去實現我的夢想,這件事真是令我開心不已。

Now, I have the chance to make my dream come true. It is exciting to me.

謝謝你們給我這個機會,也謝謝你們仔細聽完我的自我介紹。

Thanks you give me the chance and thanks you listened to my introduce.

Update 5:

雖然我英文不是講得很好,但我還是要再次謝謝你們。

Although I speak English not very well, I have to thank you again.

這是最後了 拜託大家囉 謝謝你們

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hi everyone,

    This is my first time introducing myself in English in front all of you. I easily to get nervous and shy so hope you guys can still enjoy my presentation. Thanks.

    I’m an exchange student from Rotary Club of xxx

    My name is xxx, and you can call me xxx.

    This name is given by a foreign grandfather, and I like it very much.

    I’m seventeen years old.

    I was born in xxx, and now I live in xxx.

    I am a senior high school student and studying in xxx.

    There are five people in my family, my parents, elder brother, younger sister and I.

    My parents have to go abroad pretty often because of their jobs, so it makes me be more independent. Therefore, they don’t need to worry about me.

    My elder brother is in his sophomore year in university in Taipei, and my younger sister is a junior high school student.

    I live in a happy family, and we always have a family trip during winter break and summer vacation.

    I love my family very much. My parents always support me no matter what. They never force me to do anything I don’t like.

    I am an outgoing person, even thought you can’t see it from my appearance. Furthermore, I get along with my friends as well.

    I love drawing and playing the guitar.

    I am not that good at the guitar because I didn’t touch it for long time.

    I have joined the guitar club in school, and I’m currently in the volleyball club.

    Volleyball is one of my hobbies too, so I like playing volleyball with my classmates after school.

    真的有點太多了...翻到我快吐了!!

    ^^ 你確定這個只有3分鐘嗎?

    真的有點太白話了~~~ ><

    2009-02-12 23:30:47 補充:

    I have a variety of interests as well such as reading, watching movies, listening to the music, shopping and travelling.

    I play computer or watch TV sometime when I’m really bored.

    I love foreign things very much as well.

    2009-02-12 23:31:08 補充:

    I have been dreaming of travelling all over the world since I was a little boy/ girl.

    I was thinking that would be great if I was able to live in a foreign country someday and have a chance to experience variety of school life and culture.

    2009-02-12 23:33:30 補充:

    Thanks for giving me this chance.

    My English is not pretty good, so thanks again for spending time with me.

    Source(s): myself, myself, myself, myself
  • • The harrow, everybody is good: This is I first time introduces oneself with English in front of everybody, I am anxious, therefore asks everybody not to mind, thanks. I am XXX rotary club exchange student. My name is called XXX. My this year 17 years old, is born in XXX, now lives XXX. I am the high-school student at present, goes study XXX. Our family has five members, the package blows my parents, elder brother, the younger sister also to have me. I from small am quite independent, few lets my parents worry; My brother attends the university at present; The younger sister reads in the country. Our diplomatic relation is harmonious, everywhere plays together frequently in the winter and summer vacation. I love me the family, the parents am very enlightened always support my idea and the opinion, will not always force the matter which I will be me not to want to do.

    My individuality optimistic is also lively open and bright, I am also together with the friends well. My interest are many, is likely the painting, the ball guitar, plays the volleyball. I usually do the leisure activity, is likely reads, looked that the movie, listens to music, to window-shop the travel and so on. I ordinary am bored when also will play the computer, to look that the television will kill the time. I like the overseas new things. I remembered that in my childhood, visited the world to regard is my dream, had not changed to the present. I have hoped has the lucky chance to the overseas see life, now I have this opportunity to be able finally to go to realize my dream, this matter really makes me happy. Thanks you to give me this opportunity, also thanks you to listen to my self introduction carefully.

  • 1 decade ago

    = =怎麼這麼說.

    這個人明明就說自己翻了

    希望大家給個意見

    哪裡有上來找人幫忙翻譯了.

    太誇張了.

  • 1 decade ago

    該怎麼說呢?...

    我有讀過英語,所以我知道你在說神麼。

    但是不該打的打太多,說狠一點或說白一點就是(廢話一大堆)

    重點都沒講到呢!

    我們家有五個成員,包刮我的父母、哥哥、妹妹還有我,崇這裡開始,就怪怪的!

    修改成:我家裡五個家人,有父親、母親..

    你神麼星座的?

    幾月幾號出生?

    重點都沒講到喔!

    你還是徹底檢查一下比較好

    句子很多不通順(不知該怎麼說)

    Source(s): 自己
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