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One impressive trip --

After I graduated from university for one year,I and my five classmates went to Kenting for a play.

Afeer we reached Kenting,we lived in a guest house.

I the aftermoon,we went to the白沙灣 to play volleyball on the sand.

At dawn, we headed 出火,

In the extrance,we bought some eggs from the peddler

After entering the inner,we use blaze to cook eggs.

After that, we went shopping in Kenting Street at night,

street performers and game stalls lined the street.

The second day,we played the banana boat.It is an exciting water activity.

I enjoyed the precious time with my friends.

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    One impressive trip

    One year after I had graduated from university, I and my five classmates went to Kenting for a tour. We reached Kenting and stayed in a guest house. In the aftermoon,we went to the White Sand Bay (白沙灣) to play volleyball on the sands. Then, at dawn, we headed for seeing the fire eruption(出火). In the entrance, we bought some eggs from a peddler and used the blaze to cook eggs.

    After that, we went shopping in Kenting Street at night. We enjoyed the street performance and game stalls lined on the street.

    On the second day, we cruised on the banana boat. It was an exciting water activity. I enjoyed the precious time with my friends.

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