Alexis asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

寄信給朋友 幫幫忙(修改文法)

Hi,

I am Alexis form Taiwan; I didn’t send a mail to you for a long time.

But I think it is not an enough to forget me.

I didn’t have enough time to write something to you after my summer vacation.

After I went back to Taiwan, I am too busy to write the mail.

How about you in this period?

In Taiwan a lot of persons lose his/her job.

Unemployment rate reach to 6%.

If you want to visit Taiwan, I can took you surround Taiwan.

Thanks,

Alexis

Update:

感謝~~

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hi,

    I am Alexis form Taiwan, I haven't sent you an e-mail in so long. (如果是email是這樣,如果是信是 I haven't sent you a letter in so long)

    But I think it is not long enough that you might have forgotten about me.

    I didn’t have enough time to write something to you after my summer vacation.

    After I went back to Taiwan, I am too busy to write a mail.

    How are you doing these days?

    In Taiwan a lot of people lost their jobs.

    Unemployment rate reaches up to 6%.

    If you want to visit Taiwan, I can show you around Taiwan.

    Thanks,

    Alexis

    以上我改過的

    Source(s): 住在加拿大的我
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