請各位英文高手幫我檢查文法並修正!

這是我寒假作業,要打一本英文書的報告, 我寫的是 The Wizard of Oz,綠野仙蹤, 這是我寫得大意, 請幫我檢查,謝謝 =) The gist: One day, a big cyclone blew Dothory’s house, include Dothory and Toto. When they landed, they arrived a country called Oz. Dothory wanted to go home, but she didn’t know how to got there, so the Witch of the North told... show more 這是我寒假作業,要打一本英文書的報告,
我寫的是 The Wizard of Oz,綠野仙蹤,
這是我寫得大意,
請幫我檢查,謝謝 =)

The gist:
One day, a big cyclone blew Dothory’s house, include Dothory and Toto. When they landed, they arrived a country called Oz. Dothory wanted to go home, but she didn’t know how to got there, so the Witch of the North told Dothory to ask the Wizard of Oz, just take the yellow brick road to the Emerald City.
On her way to meet the Wizard of Oz, she ran into the Scarecrow, the Tin Man, and the Cowardly lion. The Scarecrow wanted to have a brain, the Tin Man wanted a heart, and the lion wanted to be brave.
After all, who or what were they going to find?

還有,"大意"可以用 the gist 嗎?
還是有更好的說法?
那"心得"呢?該怎麼翻成英文?
而心得,
如果可以的話可以打出來給我參考嗎?(不強求)

極感激 =)
Update: 好,中文↓

有一天,巨大的龍捲風來了,桃樂絲卻和托托一起在屋內被龍捲風吹到空中。當屋子降落... "Oz",桃樂絲想要回家,卻不知如何回去,所以善良的北方巫婆告訴桃樂絲只要沿著黃... Wizard of Oz(抱歉,我不知這怎麼翻)就可以回家了。

在這段旅程中,她遇到了稻草人、錫鐵做的樵夫跟一隻膽小的獅子,稻草人想要大腦可以...

到底,他們要去找的是什麼?
Update 2: Though Dothory is just a little girl, but she has kind heart, courage,and very clever. As often as she get in trouble and encounter the barriers, she never fall back, ain’t like the normal people, the normal people will not face the tests, they just retreat. Why are they all complish their dreams?
Update 3: It because Dothory’s kind heart helps all of her friends, include the Scarecrow, the Tin Man, and the Cowardly lion, also herself, and this is what we have to learn.
Update 4: And my favorite sentence in this story is:”East, west – home’s best.” Because I think no matter what home is always the place where we
all will go at the end.
Update 5: And this sentence reminds me another one:”There’s no place like home.” Anyway, home is the best. Although "The Wizard of Oz" was just a fairy tale, but it gave me a lot of things to self examination.
Update 6: 上面是我的英文心得,拜託幫我看看吧"感激不盡!
如果覺得不行,下面是我的中文心得
Update 7: 雖然桃樂絲只是一個小女孩,但她擁有善良的心、勇氣,而且非常聰明。當她遇到困難或者... west- home's best.」因為我覺得無論如何家都是我們的依歸,而這句句子也讓我想起了另一句佳句... no place like home.」總之,家是最棒的。雖然這只是一個童話故事,但是它給我的啟示真的很多。
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