急 ! ] 幫我檢查英文作文 (拜託

有誰英文能力很強 ?! A pair of good gentle hand, a pair of good warm hand, she always is irresolute no use in me, with handles gently caresses my cheeks, she will say: " The child, you must refuel! What doesn't have is cannot achieve! So long as gives itself the confidence, courage ......, you do not... show more 有誰英文能力很強 ?!

A pair of good gentle hand, a pair of good warm hand, she always is irresolute no use in me, with handles gently caresses my cheeks, she will say: " The child, you must refuel! What doesn't have is cannot achieve! So long as gives itself the confidence, courage ......, you do not certainly have the question! " , such encourages to refuel, enables me each time to have the good performance.
Grows gradually along with us, will our road be very long, who does not have to accompany you to arrive finally,so I believed that mother's hand is in my mind boost, also symbolizes the selfless maternal love!


能幫我檢查是否有錯誤 ( 謝謝

或句子太冗長的也指導一下 ( thank you
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