What are your thoughts about cashmere? A poem?

I'm playing with textures and scents in poetry. Does this one work? Cashmere Cashmere folds encompass me,luxuriant caresses. Feel of silk forbidden tempts seduction, all my senses drift. Reduction of resistance at this softly kissed insistence, touch becomes my universe. Restraints... show more I'm playing with textures and scents in poetry. Does this one work?

Cashmere

Cashmere folds
encompass me,luxuriant
caresses. Feel of silk
forbidden tempts
seduction,
all my senses
drift.
Reduction of
resistance at this
softly kissed
insistence, touch
becomes my
universe.
Restraints undone
as silence murmurs
soothing words
in candle light,
so faint that once
again my eyes
...become
my finger
tips.
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