Daisy
Lv 7
Daisy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What are your thoughts about cashmere? A poem?

I'm playing with textures and scents in poetry. Does this one work?

Cashmere

Cashmere folds

encompass me,luxuriant

caresses. Feel of silk

forbidden tempts

seduction,

all my senses

drift.

Reduction of

resistance at this

softly kissed

insistence, touch

becomes my

universe.

Restraints undone

as silence murmurs

soothing words

in candle light,

so faint that once

again my eyes

...become

my finger

tips.

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  • Dragon
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Very sensual...I could feel it (with my eyes).

  • 1 decade ago

    Feel the cashmere, feel the words. Nice, Sin.

  • 1 decade ago

    Ah! I wish I can have cashmere in my wardrobe! The wear of winter!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    If I didn't already love cashmere, I adore it now :P And you're right, it IS seductive!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    You make me want to wrap myself in a cashmere blanket ...

    but I'm allergic.

    Nice write!

  • 1 decade ago

    Mmmm. What a lovely thought. I think the idea is wonderful, and my senses are overwhelmed by it.

  • Dondi
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Cashmere, my dear,

    Even when near,

    Is not half so lovely,

    Nor half so soft,

    Nor half so comforting,

    As are your arms

    Around my neck,

    And your lips on mine.

  • 1 decade ago

    This can be felt all over! Another winner from your pen!

  • 1 decade ago

    This one goes to a contest.

  • 1 decade ago

    Oh yes, you have done it again! Love the ending!

    'again my eyes ...become my finger tips.'

    excellence, excellence.

  • "Reduction of

    resistance at this

    softly kissed

    insistence, touch

    becomes my

    universe...."

    .....very smooth!

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