捷joyce asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

英文演講稿修定

嗨~我想徵求英文程度"極佳"的網友們幫我修訂一下我的文法

這是學校要演講的,稿子是我自己寫的︿︿特別是在在後面三段時,看看能不能幫我加些生難詞 或片語(我本人不太想寫了,只隨便寫寫)

拜託囉!

整篇都可以修定,加片語,生難詞,謝謝!@(或加長)希望我在此所說的各位大大們都可以做到!thanks!

Hello, every one. My name is Joyce. I'm here to introduce my family to you. I'm the only child in the family, so unavoidable, a little solitary sometimes. But I think I am an optimistic girl, so this part doesn’t really brothers me a lot.

I live with my mother and father. My father's personality is a little bit quick-temper, and his voice is "really bright and really big”. Although he doesn't has a lot of patient, but he was very humor lots of time. As to my mother, she thinks greatly of my education, and she has good personality.

My family likes to travel a lot. We went to Italy, USA, French, Holland, Canada and lots of different countries. We like to understand various cultures, wondrous traditional. And specially rejoice the first time you arrive at the new country and look around then explore some new different things with your own country.

My grandfather and grandmother live in America in California. Also my aunt, uncle, and cousins lived there, too. I have two cousins; their name is Evelyn and Brian. I always go to America during the vacation. I go shopping at the mall with Evelyn very often. I liked her very much.

Also, my other grandparents and cousins lived in Tai-Joing. I liked them very much too.

This is my family. Small but beautiful.

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    Hello, every one. My name is Joyce. I'm here to introduce my family to you. I'm the only child in the family, so( unavoidaby), I feel lonely sometimes. Since I am an optimistic girl, the lonely part doesn’t really brothers me much.

    I live with my mother and father. My father's personality is a little bit short-tempered, and his voice is really loud . Although he doesn't have a lot of patience, but most of the time he is very humorous. As to my mother, she thinks greatly on my education, and she has good personality.

    My family likes to travel a lot. We went to Italy, USA, French,Holland, Canada and other different countries. We like to understand various cultures, wondrous traditions. Especially rejoiced the first time arriving at a new country and exploring some different things with the country.

    My grandfather and grandmother live in California of America . Also my aunt, uncle, and cousins live there. I have two cousins; their names are velyn and Brian. I always go to America during vacations. I go shopping at the mall with Evelyn very often. I like her very much.

    Also, my other grandparents and cousins live in Tai-Jong. I like them very much too.

    So, here it is.. my small but beautiful family.

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