Do you like this chorus I wrote?

Keep it together,

Keep it together

I'd say once upon a time,

But life's just not a fairy tale

You and me

You and me

I'd say happ'ly ever after

But life's just not a fairy tale

We could fly,

We could fly,

We could fly away together

But we'd still be happ'ly never after

Happ'ly never after...

I'm 13 btw.

I've got some verses that go with it but don't know them off the top of my head.

And if you've got better words than you and me (something longer) can you please tell me?

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    us together ..

    good job by the way

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it's good but i still don't know the beat.. but it's quite nice.

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