瑩潔 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請問這兩句中文翻成英文,需要修改嗎~謝謝

我每天都寫一封信給你,只是因為我真的很關心你,每天過的開不開心,身體健不健康,工作順不順利。

I write a letter to you, which I just really care about you if you are happy and healthy, your work going well every day.

除此之外,沒有其他的想法,也沒有其他的含意,只有一片真心。

Except that, I have no other thinking, or no other meaning, either.

I just have sincerity to you.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我每天都寫一封信給你,只是因為我真的很關心你,每天過的開不開心,身體健不健康,工作順不順利。

    I write a letter to you, which I just really care about you if you are happy and healthy, your work going well every day.

    - 未表達出「每天」寫.

    - 關代which既非關係子句的主詞亦非受詞, 所以要改為in which才對.

    - your work going well 缺動詞is.

    修改→ I write a letter to you everyday, in which I just really care about whether you are happy and healthy, and whether your work is going well every day.

    建議→ I write you everyday only because I do care about whether you are happily living every single day in good health and whether your work is going well.

    註: (1)write就是寫信; (2)以連接詞because代替關代, 句子可較精簡; (3)living every single day可取代句尾的every day.

    除此之外,沒有其他的想法,也沒有其他的含意,只有一片真心。

    Except that, I have no other thinking, or no other meaning, either.

    I just have sincerity to you.

    - Except用於全部一致中的少數除外, 此處應是Besides/Apart from才對.

    - thinking與meaning其實所指意思相同

    - 善用neither...nor... 並可與but連用.

    修改→ Apart from that, I have neither other meaning nor any implication but my full sincerity.

    建議→ Apart from that, I have no particular intention or implication other than my full sincerity.

    註: no A or B other than C 除C以外沒有A或B

    Source(s): 自己的翻譯經驗; 英文文法
  • 1 decade ago

    I write a letter to you every days. Only means I just really care about you. Are you happy? Are you healthy? Or are your work going well?

    Except that, I don't have other thinking and other meaning. Only have my sincerity to you.

    P.S "my"可以換成"a"

    嗯,還有啊,外國人在寫信、說話方面,不像我們中文,通常沒什麼"逗號"哦!他們都是一語到盡。

    ↑↑以上是我長久以來的英文知識,如果有寫錯之處請見諒!

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    1 decade ago

    我以為可更簡單寫出. 你可以比較一下.

    1. The reason why I write a letter to you everyday is becuase I really

    care about if you are happy, healthy and if your work is going well.

    2. Except that, I have no either special thinking or meaning,

    I just show my sincerity to you only.

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